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    Unhappy Suicide of a gurl that wants love

    The silence of my crys
    As the pain
    Get to hard to bare
    I go depper........
    And depper
    It starts to bleed
    As the blood come crashing down
    Like a waterfall
    As it flows like river
    I only think of you
    As I can feel the coldness comeing
    As I think how you....
    How you left me alone
    Alone to die
    Alone to suffer
    I tryed to stop loving you
    But I cant
    The day you left
    You sould have killed me
    But it is to late
    You were my world
    You gave me hope
    When there was no hope
    You pulled me frome the darknees into the lite
    But when you left
    The darknees came back
    No way to get out and
    And no hope.........
    No hope of you ever coming back
    You said you loved me
    And i loved you back
    But does that mean any thing to you
    Or are you just like every guy i have meat
    That just plays with gurls hearts
    My heart is broken forever
    No way to be fixed
    No way to be hole again
    My life has just been one big mistack
    Love has no place in my heart
    My heart only has searched for love
    And only found pain
    Now there is a puddel of blood
    Around me
    I have no thoght left
    I wach over my boby
    As it layes there moshonless
    As there is no color
    As i see tears on my cheacks
    Now my heart will belong to no one
    The days go bye and no one miss the
    Gurl who only wanted to love
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: Suicide of a gurl that wants love

    How sad really! Ir seem so painful but I liked it! You have a spelling mistake but it was still good anyway! Hope to see more!
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    Re: Suicide of a gurl that wants love

    well ya me is a bad speller .... oh nice on the last comment
    still cant see how
    jesus care when If he was reall
    he would not care any way
    so ya
    thats right i dont belive in him god or any thinf ealse
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: Suicide of a gurl that wants love

    i like it,

    i would also usualy write like that but your's different...had a few mistakes but i think you've noticed ^0^

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