a small mistake, should be written: "I can no longer feel the pain"I can longerr feel the pain,
This part describes in a bit too much detail, it could make a few poeple feel drousy.And watch the flesh tear
Blood pours from my vains
All in all, this is as the tags imply a very dark manner of seeing things. Now that all these feelings are written down, try to find something positive in life. Find a movie to watch that only has simplistic childish beauty to bring things back up. Whenever I have a bad moment, I think it out, let my feelings pour out without involving anyone else except those who are willing to listen. Then I write something down and I guess if the person who hurt you won't listen or understand, only time can heal the wound, never fully, but enough to let your life go on.
Nicely written, but a bit repetitive, even if a song repeats itself, I prefer changing verses and slight modifications in the choir, though that's my personal taste