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    Re: Suicide's Picture

    Y'know, this is a pretty good poem, one thing is bothering me a little though, right near the end you start recycling lines. It adds to the poem in a way but aside from that it doesn't really fit, this is however, only my opinion.

    If this is a song, please disregard everything I've said.
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    Shini: Your song still rocks, because you wrote it and it also lets us know how you feel when you wrote the song! You truly are a great song writer! Happy New Year Angel!

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    @ kimchi24-Well this is a Song! It is not a peom.I do not write poems,only Songs! I stated when I wrote this that it was a Song!

    @ FLawEdmiNd-No this is not a poem.This is a song.But thank you for the comment though.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooo very much again Fox!! *hugs* Your the best!!!
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    That was a very good song sis. Great job! It has so many mixed emotions in it which it made all the more interesting. I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Thank you soooooooooooooooo very much Sis!!!! *hugs* I'm soooo glad that you liked it. And hopefully i'll have something new soon lol
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    This song is so amazing. Have you ever thought about doing it for a career? You would be great at it. I read your last one and I must say you do seem like you put your heart into it. You have me singing along to it! Though right now my singing is not that good because I'm half asleep but still none the less GREAT JOB!!! Let me know when you have another one I want to be the first to read it...

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    Thank you soooooooooooooo very much for the awesome comment Ky-lyrra!!!! *hugs* And yes I have thought about writting songs for a career,it's my dream 2 someday do just that. Thank you again sooooo very much! Your comment has made me soooo very happy. And I will be sure 2 let you know when I write a new song.
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    But I'm your number one fan! lol! You know I love your poems because the let us know what your feeling, and your really good at writing songs too!

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