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    summers time

    [i wrote this please tell me what u think haha i really suck at poems but i thought this one was pretty cool check it ]

    I’ve been writing for an hour
    Yet I’ve come up with nothing
    My brain is slowly dyeing
    I have to write something
    The time is quickly passing
    My thoughts are f***ing thumping
    To the sound of my broken heart.

    So the days are getting longer
    I cut a little deeper
    I’m feeling a little sadder
    And my bloods tasting sweeter
    I’m lying on the ground
    In a puddle, I drown
    But the thought of dyeing sounds
    So much better.

    (i didnt exactly finish it cause i ran out of things to say)
    thanks!
    ------Samurai Automator------


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    Re: summers time

    wow, i didnt' know that we drown in a puddle, lol, j/k. i like it, very well done. keep on writing.


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