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    Sunflower Waltz

    Sunflower Waltz...

    Here we stand on the edge, Waiting for the sunrise to begin
    Watching as the sea crashes, Into the cliffs below
    My hand into yours, Our fingers intertwined
    I throw my head back, And watch the birds fly above...

    "They are so free"

    A walk on the sand, As the water touchs me
    Playing tag with the sea, Can you believe
    Arms wrap around me, You begin to spin
    I laugh with such joy, As you hold me so lovingly...

    "I wish for this to last forever"

    Hand in hand, We run across the sand
    Laughing and smiling, So in love
    Dancing in the sunlight, The sea are stage
    We begin to waltz, You dive in for a kiss...

    "Such a sweet kiss"

    Waltzing slowly, Enjoying the sun and sea
    Hands around my waist, My arms around your neck
    Swaying to the sea's melodey, Stareing into each others eyes
    As the clouds roll by, You pull me closer and lean in...

    "Another loveing kiss"

    As the sun sets, We watch the sea glow
    The moon takes form, And the stars begin to shine
    The sea calms, And the wind blows lightly
    All takes place before us, As we hold onto one another...

    "We change along with day and night"

    This feels like a dream, Can I believe in it
    Though your arms feel so warm around me, Your touch has to be true
    Tears begin to fall, Are they your's or mine
    It begins to rain, So I don't know how or why...

    "The rain covers our tears..of love"

    Here we stand on the edge, Waiting for the sunrise to begin...once again
    Watching as the sea crashes, Into the cliffs below...as we stand tall
    My hand into yours, Our fingers intertwined...and love in our eyes
    I throw my head back, And watch the birds fly above...wishing we could fly away together

    "They are so free, Going as the please"

    A walk on the sand, As the water touchs me...i step back
    Playing tag with the sea, Can you believe...or is this a dream
    Arms wrap around me, You begin to spin...around and around
    I laugh with such joy, As you hold me so lovingly...and kiss me softly

    "I wish for this to last forever, Till the end of time"

    The sun rises and falls, The moon glows and the stars shine...all at the sametime
    Rain and sunflowers begins to fall into the sea, Winds begin to blow as we spread out our arms
    Twilight is happening, It's begining once again...let us dance during this twilight
    Take my hand into your's, And let us leap into the sea of twilight and sunflowers...and be together forever...


    "Let us dream a never ending dream, And kiss softly in the sea of sunflowers..."


    I wrote this as a V-day gift for my wonderful boyfriend Dj (who's on a different site). I plan on giving it to him on V-day. So I just wanted to share this with everyone and see what you all thought of my gift. So please tell me what you think k. ^___^
    Last edited by Shinigami's_Angel; Feb 11, 2008 at 06:08 PM. Reason: mixing spellling errors
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Sunflower Waltz

    AWWWW that was so lovely, he is going to love it, I know I would if my wife sent me something like that, (yes I declare me and deanna a true couple) anyways back on topic, I had that song from, oh what was that song, The Nutcracker? with the dancning mushrums stuck in my head, parden my spelling I cant spell worth crap today, anyways it is verry lovely and I am sure he would hold you close and kiss you 20,000+ times for it!
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    Re: Sunflower Waltz

    Wow sis beautiful poem. It should be in a greeting card! You can feel the love flowing out of every word and that's what makes it so great. Bravo!
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: Sunflower Waltz

    I will take it and put it in a card and Give it for my BF ...If you donot mind..
    Reallly lovely and you use a Good words and strong ...so Good work in it ...
    well done...^^

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    Re: Sunflower Waltz

    I LOVE IT!! I am sure he will think the same ^^ It's a wonder song about a strong feeling:LOVE ^^ Keep you the good work ^^
    (you have small mistakes but it doesn't take away from the greatness of your work ^^)
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    Re: Sunflower Waltz

    Your writing is gradually improving not that you haven't been good, but this song has so much emotion and also presents a vivid image in my head! Not many songs can do that to me, especially since I'm a music lover! The only thing that I would encourage or speak on is to continue to express yourself through song/words. Kudos to you for creating a master piece in my eyes.

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