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    Sunflowers Grave...

    Sunflowers Grave...

    I made a mistake, I choose the wrong one
    How could I have been so stupid, Why didn't I see it then
    I thought they was what I wanted, But it was you
    This mistake has cost me, More than my life ever could...

    "A broken heart is what I paid"

    I thought I loved them, But it was you who still held my heart
    Breaking into pieces, My soul is bein torn apart
    I've fallen into the abssy of no return, I can no longer see the light
    Lying in the darkness, In a field of sunflowers...

    "This is where they have left me"

    Yellow and black, It surrounds me
    I'm being consumed, The petals are chaining me down
    Darkness has become my new walls, No light can get in
    All alone in this endless darkness, In a field of wild sunflowers...

    "Is this to be my resting place"

    It was all a lie, Everything they promised me
    It was a show, Now the curtain has come crashing down
    The lights go out, And i'm left all alone on this made up stage
    Was it all makebelieve, A dream or a nightmare...

    "I don't know what is reality anymore"

    Sounds of thunder, Feel the icy rains
    My skin is so numb, Eyes no longer hold any meaning
    Fingertips bloody, Trying to tear apart the petal like chains
    Tear stains on my face, I no longer have a voice to screamout with...

    "I'm starting to forget everything"

    As I lie on this flower covered floor, All fighting has left my body
    This is how they wanted me to be, To become their pretty yet broken doll
    I use to love the sight of sunflowers, But now they are just a source for painful memories
    Of the one I so trusted, The one who threw me into this darkness...along with the sunflowers...

    "Darkness has caged me and these sunflowers"

    I made a mistake, I choose the wrong one...what have I done
    How could I have been so stupid, Why didn't I see it then...it was all my fault
    I thought they was what I wanted, But it was you...and it's to late now
    This mistake has cost me, More than my life ever could...for I can no longer live...

    "A broken heart is what I paid, I paid in pieces"

    I thought I loved them, But it was you who still held my heart...always
    Breaking into pieces, My soul is bein torn apart...why don't they just kill me
    I've fallen into the abssy of no return, I can no longer see the light...all I have are the sunflowers
    Lying in the darkness, In a field of sunflowers...crying for the pain to finally end...

    "This is where they have left me, All alone to die"

    Yellow and black, It surrounds me...it's all I can see now
    I'm being consumed, The petals are chaining me down...I can't fight them off
    Darkness has become my new walls, No light can get in...no more sunlight
    All alone in this endless darkness, In a field of wild sunflowers...this is my coffin...


    "The petal like chains begin to loosen, My body falls free..
    Eyes go over my surroundings, Yellow and black is all I still see..
    My broken heart is by my side, In tiny pieces..
    I lie on the sunflower covered floor, Watching the flowers wither away along with me..
    This is my final resting place, My sunflower filled grave..."


    R.I.P You who once loved Sunflowers...



    This is kinda the sad verzion of my last lyrics I wrote "Sunflower Waltz". It's been raining like crazy so it put me into a sad kind of mood lol. Well I hope you all enjoy it, please comment ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Sunflowers Grave...

    This so good yet sad.
    i loved it
    keep writing k?

    Don't trust me....

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    Re: Sunflowers Grave...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    This is how they wanted me to be, To become their pretty yet broken doll

    This has to be the best line I have heard so far. I just love it! It says so much by only saying so little. As for the rest of it it was beautiful. It had a sad tone to it but it kept you reading. You do a great job in your words and how you put them together. You can feel the feelings from this poem as well as all of your other ones. Great job.

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    Re: Sunflowers Grave...

    Great poem sis! I don't think you are capable of writting a bad one. This one is filled with happy and sad emotions. It's like one minute you're happy and the next you could cry. I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Sunflowers Grave...

    I loved the poem/lyrics ^^ lol It is a sad song but wonderful

    I thought I loved them, But it was you who still held my heart
    Breaking into pieces, My soul is bein torn apart
    I've fallen into the abssy of no return, I can no longer see the light
    Lying in the darkness, In a field of sunflowers...

    These are my favorite lines. I personally love this song and want to here more from you later on.
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