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Reply With QuoteWhile it is hard to follow at some points the somber imagery transports me some place soothing. I especially love the last line.
darkened pich black night with faint moon light
songs are woven threw tiney crickets grieves
the wind blows gently ruffeling the leaves
wind licking the skin ever so slight
stars start to shimmer, and glisten so bright
the fog creaps in covering the mossy ground
untill all is covered leaving nothing unbound
yet nothing is scathed, not even a blight
mountains now glisten from the bright sunlight
fog disperses showing the dew covered moss
a sight more spectacular few even cross
like the moon that shows at night, the sun shows ever bright.
Last edited by Dragons2801; Apr 02, 2010 at 05:38 PM.
within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.
While it is hard to follow at some points the somber imagery transports me some place soothing. I especially love the last line.
very nice, i like it
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I agree it dos have a soothing effect. It is a little hard to follow the first time around but the second time I had no problem. But it still has the same soothing affect no matter how many times you read it and I like that.Originally Posted by beast
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
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thank you for your kind words.........................
within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.
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