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    sunrise

    darkened pich black night with faint moon light
    songs are woven threw tiney crickets grieves
    the wind blows gently ruffeling the leaves
    wind licking the skin ever so slight
    stars start to shimmer, and glisten so bright
    the fog creaps in covering the mossy ground
    untill all is covered leaving nothing unbound
    yet nothing is scathed, not even a blight
    mountains now glisten from the bright sunlight
    fog disperses showing the dew covered moss
    a sight more spectacular few even cross
    like the moon that shows at night, the sun shows ever bright.
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    Re: sunrise

    While it is hard to follow at some points the somber imagery transports me some place soothing. I especially love the last line.

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    Re: sunrise

    very nice, i like it
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    Re: sunrise

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    While it is hard to follow at some points the somber imagery transports me some place soothing. I especially love the last line.
    I agree it dos have a soothing effect. It is a little hard to follow the first time around but the second time I had no problem. But it still has the same soothing affect no matter how many times you read it and I like that.
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    Re: sunrise

    thank you for your kind words.........................

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