I am selfish.
Spiteful, jealous.
Possessive and over zealous.
Yet, I'm lazy. Uncommitted.
Crazy, yep. I can admit it.
I am sloppy, so unclean.
Nice at first, but, then I'm mean.
Take all I can, because I'm greedy.
I'll take you too, because I'm needy.
If my breath stinks, I'll still sing.
And my toilet has a ring.
But there wont be one upon my finger.
Cuz there's a garbage smell that lingers.
And it chases everyone away.
But, there aint much that I can say....
I'm just myself, a basket case.
Don't like it? Then get out my face!
... Not Ever Again...
Hey, it's a good little poem, but what does it have to do with sunshine and rainbows? The poem is great but the title doesn't make sense to me, accept for the reason that you typed it in different colors making it look like the spectrum of a rainbow.
It is sarcasm.... That is the value of the title. Y'know, because everything I wrote was depressing? So... its like the opposite of sunshine and rainbows?
... Not Ever Again...
This reminds me of the Hikikomori in Welcome to The N.H.K. A sickening imagine but well written.
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