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    be sure ....

    this is my first poem at all so i hop you like it :

    be sure .....

    be sure that love will become the whole world ...
    be sure that love will become the answer in every loneliness .....
    be sure that love will never become line in the pages on world ....
    be sure that the love will never become just word on one of the life pages ....
    be sure that love can become the key of the loneliness ...
    be sure that in every heart ther are fountains of love...
    be sure that the life was nothing without the light of love ....
    love will never become an ink spot one paper ....
    be sure ..... =^_^=
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    Re: be sure ....

    wow,a nice poem,it focuses on love,its great,i liked it,and i liked this verse so much coz thats wat i need.

    be sure that love will become the answer in every loneliness .....
    sometimes i wish i never existed
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    Re: be sure ....

    Quote Originally Posted by heartless View Post
    wow,a nice poem,it focuses on love,its great,i liked it,and i liked this verse so much coz thats wat i need.
    good i am happy that you like the poem ... this is great for my first poem (thank you) .... =^_^=
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