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    Sweet

    Sweet yet Harsh,
    I long to find you in this universe ,
    But, my mission eludes me ,
    Like a fly eludes capture,
    I shall walk this life alone,
    Knowing no peace,
    No happieness,
    With no soul I shall perish,
    Alone and separated.


    Yeah i know it sucks but i was required to write a poem like that ......I guess i like it .... sort of ahh well there it is.....

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    Re: Sweet

    ah such sweet words are spoken through this poem and such deep meaning i try to find myself in it but lose myself as i ponder at such sweet words
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: Sweet

    Sweet is something familiar but allof the people never seem that way all the time but sweet it means a little deep feelings!!!!!!
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: Sweet

    Well your wrong. It's quite well, I like it. It's simple but yet it holds a truth that has no end.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Sweet

    Quote Originally Posted by awesomeparty12 View Post
    ah such sweet words are spoken through this poem and such deep meaning i try to find myself in it but lose myself as i ponder at such sweet words
    thank you :0 iu have many many more i will eventualy get to post them all

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    Re: Sweet

    Quote Originally Posted by BrokenLover101 View Post
    Well your wrong. It's quite well, I like it. It's simple but yet it holds a truth that has no end.
    Thanks i really never looked at it that way ... my teacher says i have no potential so i dont know how i truly felt about this poem

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    Re: Sweet

    Quote Originally Posted by CBtay01 View Post
    Sweet yet Harsh,
    I long to find you in this universe ,
    But, my mission eludes me ,
    Like a fly eludes capture,
    I shall walk this life alone,
    Knowing no peace,
    No happieness,
    With no soul I shall perish,
    Alone and separated.


    Yeah i know it sucks but i was required to write a poem like that ......I guess i like it .... sort of ahh well there it is.....
    The master!
    Run!

    Because the master has sent us
    we proclaim the downfall
    of the rider of wickedness
    feeding his ulcer of envy

    The truth is like a thunderstorm
    it comes to you, you can hear it
    to announce it, is oh so bitter
    it comes to you to destroy you

    Because the night lays dead
    we proclaim the day of judgment
    there will be no pity
    run, run for your lives

    The truth is a choir on the wind
    no angle comes to avenge you
    these days are your last
    it will break you apart like little sticks

    It comes to you as corruption

    The truth is a choir on the wind
    no angle comes to avenge you
    these days are your last
    it will break you apart like little sticks
    His bell is tolling for you

    He wants you to come home

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    Re: Sweet

    Quote Originally Posted by CBtay01 View Post
    Sweet yet Harsh,
    I long to find you in this universe ,
    But, my mission eludes me ,
    Like a fly eludes capture,
    I shall walk this life alone,
    Knowing no peace,
    No happieness,
    With no soul I shall perish,
    Alone and separated.


    Yeah i know it sucks but i was required to write a poem like that ......I guess i like it .... sort of ahh well there it is.....
    I didn't think it sucked.
    I think it spoke loudly.
    I liked it a lot. Especially the fly eluding capture thing.
    Hope you'll find your happiness. Everyone has a soul.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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