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    Re: Sweet

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I didn't think it sucked.
    I think it spoke loudly.
    I liked it a lot. Especially the fly eluding capture thing.
    Hope you'll find your happiness. Everyone has a soul.
    THank you for that i wrote it after like a two week writers block
    but i still thank you for the wonderful comment

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    Re: Sweet

    i love the contrast, it makes the other side of the story even farther apart. Very good, I've read lots of worse and few better for short poems. Good Job!
    life is like a road - when take a detour into the woods, it's not only more fun, but more dangerous...

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    Re: Sweet

    Quote Originally Posted by lilyofthevalley View Post
    i love the contrast, it makes the other side of the story even farther apart. Very good, I've read lots of worse and few better for short poems. Good Job!
    I thank you very much all these post make me feel so much better about my work thanks for putting a smile on my face

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