Short but it is very touching.I wonder if you are dedicating this poem to somebody you care for.If it is,that person is a lucky person to know you.
Before I go to sleep I look at you and I see...
The stars and the moon in you're deep blue eyes,
I here the wind in your deep husk voice,
I feel the love in your sweet tender kisses,
And when i go to sleep i wisper in your ear,
I love you and sweet dreams my lover.
IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER
Short but it is very touching.I wonder if you are dedicating this poem to somebody you care for.If it is,that person is a lucky person to know you.
Although a bit short it was still a sweet poem. Good job.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
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ya i did do it for some one! i really love them! i know it was short but i dident know what else to put on it!
IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER
Aww. Very sweet and touching. Only a few spelling mistakes, It's really good. Keep it up![]()
thank you! thats alot better of comments then i got last time!
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Short yet touching... nice work... ^^ really is a sweet poem..
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Wow, that's a very sweet poem you wrote, Angel_in_hell! Congratulate yourself on such a heartwarming poem. It sounded like a very sweet and gentle song sung by a person truly in love, hehe ^^ Anyways, great job; only one misspelled word and some uncapitalized I's. I love your work! I hope that I could see more of your poems as wonderful as this one, or better yet, even more beautiful! Keep up the good work! ^^
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