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    Sweet dreams my love

    Before I go to sleep I look at you and I see...
    The stars and the moon in you're deep blue eyes,
    I here the wind in your deep husk voice,
    I feel the love in your sweet tender kisses,
    And when i go to sleep i wisper in your ear,
    I love you and sweet dreams my lover.

    IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER

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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    Short but it is very touching.I wonder if you are dedicating this poem to somebody you care for.If it is,that person is a lucky person to know you.

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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    Although a bit short it was still a sweet poem. Good job.
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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    ya i did do it for some one! i really love them! i know it was short but i dident know what else to put on it!

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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    Aww. Very sweet and touching. Only a few spelling mistakes, It's really good. Keep it up

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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    thank you! thats alot better of comments then i got last time!

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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    Short yet touching... nice work... ^^ really is a sweet poem..

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    Re: Sweet dreams my love

    Wow, that's a very sweet poem you wrote, Angel_in_hell! Congratulate yourself on such a heartwarming poem. It sounded like a very sweet and gentle song sung by a person truly in love, hehe ^^ Anyways, great job; only one misspelled word and some uncapitalized I's. I love your work! I hope that I could see more of your poems as wonderful as this one, or better yet, even more beautiful! Keep up the good work! ^^

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