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    Sweet Revenge

    The way you hurt me
    I'm not sad
    I am angry
    So all I think about now
    Is sweet revenge
    On you sweetheart
    The way you treated me
    You deserve it
    So three cheers for
    Sweet revenge



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    Re: Sweet Revenge

    ^o^ i like this one! very short and sweet, like the revenge you're speaking of! very good...

    i think if you used punctuation (periods, commas, dashes) it would provide more emphasis on what you're feeling...

    great work! you're already improving!

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    Re: Sweet Revenge

    Very good! and so short as well! I liked it! The irony on SWEET REVENGE INDEED!!!! It could feel so good really so thats why I love it!!! So I hope to see more!
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    Re: Sweet Revenge

    very good!! nice poem u really show how u feel in this!!!


    thank you equinn!!!!!!

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