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Reply With Quote^o^ i like this one! very short and sweet, like the revenge you're speaking of! very good...
i think if you used punctuation (periods, commas, dashes) it would provide more emphasis on what you're feeling...
great work! you're already improving!
The way you hurt me
I'm not sad
I am angry
So all I think about now
Is sweet revenge
On you sweetheart
The way you treated me
You deserve it
So three cheers for
Sweet revenge
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^o^ i like this one! very short and sweet, like the revenge you're speaking of! very good...
i think if you used punctuation (periods, commas, dashes) it would provide more emphasis on what you're feeling...
great work! you're already improving!
Very good! and so short as well! I liked it! The irony on SWEET REVENGE INDEED!!!! It could feel so good really so thats why I love it!!! So I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
very good!! nice poem u really show how u feel in this!!!
thank you equinn!!!!!!
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