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    Sword in hand

    Into the scene she ran
    Sword in hand
    Her goal to save the holy land
    Into the field she ran
    Ready to fight to the very last man
    She fought on and on
    She fought until they were all gone
    Alone she stood
    Not a single man left to kill
    Sword in hand
    She fought to the very last man
    Alone she stood in the field
    She didn't noticed who she killed
    Every man dead
    No man left with his head
    She ran to save the holy land
    but now she was left with nothing but the dead
    Sword in hand
    She fought too hard
    She kept going on and on
    Fighting until dawn
    Not a single man was left
    She was now the savior to a land of death
    She rushed in to save
    Her sword made her it's slave
    The object of protection used her
    Now she's left alone
    Sword in hand
    Now the savior to a dead land

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    Re: Sword in hand

    He screamed out in pain as the last shot rang true
    His life was ending with an agony he never knew
    A fools heart led him here,unkowing of his fate
    not knowing he'd end up dying for her, the one for whom he held hate
    As the blood poured out, a single tear did fall
    He thought of his love, and of how he had failed her after all.

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    Re: Sword in hand

    hheehhee kool poem both of you!

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    Re: Sword in hand

    WOW that was good and it had an awsome rhyme to it
    keep up the great work

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    Re: Sword in hand

    dudes...FREAKIN' SWEET! that was a really good poem... im gonna share it with all my friends...(none of whom go to this site....yet)....of course i'll give credit to who made it when i share it with them..

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    Re: Sword in hand

    Quote Originally Posted by MisguidedAngel
    He screamed out in pain as the last shot rang true
    His life was ending with an agony he never knew
    A fools heart led him here,unkowing of his fate
    not knowing he'd end up dying for her, the one for whom he held hate
    As the blood poured out, a single tear did fall
    He thought of his love, and of how he had failed her after all.
    Ooooooohhhh ^_^ Very noice

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    Re: Sword in hand

    cool, cool poem!! congratulations for a job well done!

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    Re: Sword in hand

    Wow! Simply terrific. Brilliantly written! I like the whole swords and the fighting theme of this poem, Sasha! This one really stood out for me, from all the other ones that you wrote. Keep the great work. Hope to see some more.

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