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    Symphony

    In a cold mix of hate and rage,
    the powers are eternal

    Descended a strong eye
    he struck with deep music

    The orchestra plays violently
    as the characters play their parts

    The cycle continues to revolve around
    a dark musician's mind

    The fantasia of evil sadistic rage
    is starting to become godlike

    But these powers are the workings
    of a truly malevolent entity

    The devil plays his fiddle
    are you ready to make a deal

    When it ends, I don't know
    The fingers of the musician's are becoming worn

    Shedding tears of scarlet now
    they continue to keep the beat

    One by one the people perish
    bodies scattered for miles

    Rage is felt within the instruments
    their insanity is showing

    No longer can these men play on
    they call it a day and hit the ground, dead

    As long as the piano rushes
    the warrior will sing
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    Re: Symphony

    Wow I really enjoyed this. You are quite the writer eh? I love when I find new artists to look out for.

    Shedding tears of scarlet now
    they continue to keep the beat
    I loved those lines. It really showed the tenacity of this rage, this music. How the melody of all this "evil" continued to play on... until death.

    This poem was like some harmonious mesh of war and music. Quite nice, and such an orignal direction.
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    Re: Symphony

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Wow I really enjoyed this. You are quite the writer eh? I love when I find new artists to look out for.



    I loved those lines. It really showed the tenacity of this rage, this music. How the melody of all this "evil" continued to play on... until death.

    This poem was like some harmonious mesh of war and music. Quite nice, and such an orignal direction.
    Thank you, I really enjoy the whole "Ghost in the Shell" theme you got going on there by the way.

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    Re: Symphony

    Wow.. marvelous description of... madness... great usage of words... flawless flow... I can actually even picture the type of music they are playing... this is just powerful... o.o

    Love the way you used the words.. but It would be better if this kind of simple short poems to be rhymed.... would be more interesting but then again.. the description were vivid... so it was very entertaining ^^ Keep up the good work..

    The fantasia of evil sadistic rage
    is starting to become godlike
    This part reminds me of Dota o.O

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    Re: Symphony

    I love the image of one cursed to play until they die. It is great.

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    Re: Symphony

    Wow,

    Thats truly something. The grimreapers orcastra is what it sounded like to me. I liked it a lot, It sounded like the souls that have nothing left to do but drain away, till their is nothing left of them... Excellent job hopefully Ill be able to keep up with you and everyone else, this is probably the first place that I have seen any talent for writing poetry. Again good job.

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