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    The Tables Turn

    The Tables Turn

    My ears ringing
    head about to Explode
    what problems are you brining to me?
    Your life story unfolds

    I don't care about who did you wrong
    I don't want to hear your song
    so sing it somewhere else
    because here you don't belong

    you weren't here for me
    when my times were dark and down
    I needed help, but guess what?
    you were nowhere to be found

    And now that you're like me...
    in need
    Don't expect me to be around

    you've made your mistakes
    now fix them
    you've done the deed
    now fess up

    Isn't it funny
    How the tables turn?
    You think everything will stay bright and sunny
    now it's your time to burn
    you don't realize you're living in a fantasy
    I'd hate to be you
    when you're hit by reality

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    Re: The Tables Turn

    Yes Indeed, tables do turn. And they always turn for a reason. Know Im not sure if you're posting this from your own experience... but if you are let me offer some advice.

    Try not turning a cold shoulder to those who have wronged you... treat others as you would have liked to have been treated.

    But I don't mean to preach, I totaly understand the feelings in this poem.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Tables Turn

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Yes Indeed, tables do turn. And they always turn for a reason. Know Im not sure if you're posting this from your own experience... but if you are let me offer some advice.

    Try not turning a cold shoulder to those who have wronged you... treat others as you would have liked to have been treated.

    But I don't mean to preach, I totaly understand the feelings in this poem.
    It is from personal experience
    and while I always want to step up and be the better person
    thats just not how it works all the time...
    but yeah I know what you mean
    "Lead By Example"

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    Re: The Tables Turn

    I haven't seen you post a poem here before so I'm going to assume this is your first one. You did an excellent job capturing something that people encounter everyday. The world and the people in it can be shady from all perspectives, and your right it doesn't always work like that sometimes! Keep up the good work KimiFemi!

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    I haven't seen you post a poem here before so I'm going to assume this is your first one. You did an excellent job capturing something that people encounter everyday. The world and the people in it can be shady from all perspectives, and your right it doesn't always work like that sometimes! Keep up the good work KimiFemi!
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    Re: The Tables Turn

    well well your first one here and its awesome... you must write more! and you know you got me as a fan and more!
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    Re: The Tables Turn

    I know
    first poem up ...
    lets bring out the bubbly death lol

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    Re: The Tables Turn

    i like it. it has a sort of sassy vibe to it without losing the whole poem feeling. i've never encontered a situation like this one but reading your poem made me feel like i had. very nice i like how you captured the feeling of the situation.
    every rose has a thorn

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