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Reply With QuoteAwesome poem! Hope you make more since I know you'll do good on all of them!Hope you make more anyway.
Tainted Rose
Only a vision of beauty…is what they all adore.
Darkness and insanity… they choose to ignore.
Just like a rose…my beauty will fade.
Leaving me with nothing but shades of gray.
Drifting away from an empty shell.
Lifeless inside…but no one could tell.
Just like a rose…my heart will break.
Leaving nothing for you to take…
Just like a rose…I’ll entirely fade
Leaving you memories of nothing but pain.
Author's Note- Alright this is actually the first poem ever that rhymed in my collections of poetry. This was probably written a month ago, while in Lit class. I was bored from the lecture and decided to write this.
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Awesome poem! Hope you make more since I know you'll do good on all of them!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
good job Lady A i liked it
it flowed very well
but I kinda wanted you to go more into the darkness and insanity you hinted at in the begining ..
Thank you very much Kuwi for your comment....and I will post more up. I would love to actaully go more indepth with that first verse...but possibly as another poem. For this one...I really aimed for shortness, I felt that it would have gotton annoying if it continued on with its ryhming scheme. But that is just me...at one moment I like my poetry...then the next I get sick of it.
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>.< lol it worked out well anyway but I would love to see what you come up with next
Yea, I'm actaully in the proccess of the poem called Insanity (Like I posted before). I suppose, I did actaully want to get more into the darkness and insanity from the first verse of my poem. After I had posted earlier, I had a line from the top of my head and started writing. So I'm multi-tasking right now (lol).
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oh that was beautiful. For something you did in class with distractions and stuffway nice. <---loves poetry
No Way! I'm The Beautiful One Dammit!
Ty, Ty...lol what can I say...my lecture class was just way lagging that day. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem though, it means you had a nice read. I myself love it when I read other poetry from many talented writers...it makes me feel relaxed and in the flow.
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