Tainted - Page 2

*Lasura* · Apr 25, 2007, 10:28 PM

Wow!!! This is really great!!!! Why didn't you put it in the POTW, i'd deffinetely wote for you!!!

Wonderful, dark and emotional, I love it!!!! I'll be waiting for the next one!

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 25, 2007, 10:32 PM

To be honest, I'll stay away from those (^.^'). For now, in the most part. I'll probably have the new one up by tomarrow...but possibly its draft. Dark and emotional always seems to come up in th most part of my poetry, sometimes it wierds me out (lol).

*Lasura* · Apr 25, 2007, 10:39 PM

It's harder to writte dark and serious poems and you're doing it wonderful, so... I understood that funny is my think... I don't know how to express my sadness or something in a poem... So it makes me love ours even more.

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 25, 2007, 11:00 PM

You and I are opposite...it is sometimes hard for me to right lovey dovey poems without it having something dark and mysterious to it. But Tainted Rose was inspired by real life sitautions (When I look at it)., I suppose my proffessor was talking about society and then I drifted off. But in society, the majority care about the outside.

!Rave_Grip · Apr 25, 2007, 11:48 PM

Even though it's your first poem you did a very good job. Short and sweet. Err- not sweet but awesome. ^_^

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 26, 2007, 12:51 AM

lol yea, ryhming wasn't my style...I prefer free verse in many styles. But thanks for the comment on my poem being sweet er...awesome (lol).

*CherryBlossom18* · Apr 28, 2007, 03:27 AM

Nice poem I liked it alot. I look forward to reading your next one.

Apr 25, 2007, 10:28 PM	#9 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,885 Thanks: 56 Thanked 38 Times in 35 Posts	Re: Tainted Wow!!! This is really great!!!! Why didn't you put it in the POTW, i'd deffinetely wote for you!!! Wonderful, dark and emotional, I love it!!!! I'll be waiting for the next one! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Tainted To be honest, I'll stay away from those (^.^'). For now, in the most part. I'll probably have the new one up by tomarrow...but possibly its draft. Dark and emotional always seems to come up in th most part of my poetry, sometimes it wierds me out (lol). __________________ ~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
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Apr 25, 2007, 10:39 PM	#11 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,885 Thanks: 56 Thanked 38 Times in 35 Posts	Re: Tainted It's harder to writte dark and serious poems and you're doing it wonderful, so... I understood that funny is my think... I don't know how to express my sadness or something in a poem... So it makes me love ours even more. __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Tainted You and I are opposite...it is sometimes hard for me to right lovey dovey poems without it having something dark and mysterious to it. But Tainted Rose was inspired by real life sitautions (When I look at it)., I suppose my proffessor was talking about society and then I drifted off. But in society, the majority care about the outside. __________________ ~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
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!Rave_Grip Banned Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,431 Thanks: 2 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts	Re: Tainted Even though it's your first poem you did a very good job. Short and sweet. Err- not sweet but awesome. ^_^
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Apr 26, 2007, 12:51 AM	#14 (permalink)
Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Tainted lol yea, ryhming wasn't my style...I prefer free verse in many styles. But thanks for the comment on my poem being sweet er...awesome (lol). __________________ ~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	Re: Tainted Nice poem I liked it alot. I look forward to reading your next one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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