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    Re: Tainted

    Wow!!! This is really great!!!! Why didn't you put it in the POTW, i'd deffinetely wote for you!!! Wonderful, dark and emotional, I love it!!!! I'll be waiting for the next one!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Tainted

    To be honest, I'll stay away from those (^.^'). For now, in the most part. I'll probably have the new one up by tomarrow...but possibly its draft. Dark and emotional always seems to come up in th most part of my poetry, sometimes it wierds me out (lol).
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    It's harder to writte dark and serious poems and you're doing it wonderful, so... I understood that funny is my think... I don't know how to express my sadness or something in a poem... So it makes me love ours even more.

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    You and I are opposite...it is sometimes hard for me to right lovey dovey poems without it having something dark and mysterious to it. But Tainted Rose was inspired by real life sitautions (When I look at it)., I suppose my proffessor was talking about society and then I drifted off. But in society, the majority care about the outside.
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    Re: Tainted

    Even though it's your first poem you did a very good job. Short and sweet. Err- not sweet but awesome. ^_^

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    lol yea, ryhming wasn't my style...I prefer free verse in many styles. But thanks for the comment on my poem being sweet er...awesome (lol).
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    Re: Tainted

    Nice poem I liked it alot. I look forward to reading your next one.
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