Thread: Takahashi and Suzuki. The Ninjas in love

I know that this is rubbish, but I thought I may as well share it with you all. I will be happy to take in any comments and suggestions to improve my story.

Takahashi and Suzuki. The Ninjas in love

It was a summer night, The streets were empty and the
air was cold. Complete silence roamed the small and
cramped streets of Kyoto. It was the night after the
Gion Matsuri festival. One of the most popular and
famous festivals in all of Japan. Thousands of people
came to see the very festival, But what nobody knew was
that thousands of lives were at stake.

*Please note that this story starts 3 days before the Gion Matsuri Festival,
Our story revolves around Takahashi, a 18 year old Ninja that fights for rights
not wrongs. Alternatively he has a girlfriend whom is also a Ninja, Suzuki a
beautiful women that has been trained under the ninjitsu form ''Akiba-ryu''
Takahashi however, has been not been trained any form of ninjitsu other
than the fighting skills he was taught by his father.*

The sun was beating down on Takahashi's face, small drolets of sweat ran
down the side of his face, He was panting and breathing heavily. He tried
to open his eyes, but the more he tried, the more he failed. The wounds on
his chest were severe. Without proper medical help the wounds would
continually bleed. And lead to large amounts of blood loss. ''Screw it'' He
said to himself. He managed to open one of his eyes and examine his
surroundings. There was nothing but a barren wasteland, no sign of any
towns, water or even life. He looked beside him. And saw a figure in the
dusty background, as the figure drew closer he could see that is was a riding
a horse.