atomik_sprout

Take it easy...
Let go, and relax yourself.
Because being disgruntled is
very bad for your health.

Break away...
From "The Norm", find yourself in this mess.
Quit worrying about what others think or
who is the best.

Just chill...
And let yourself unwind.
Tomorrow is another day,
don't worry all the time.

Have a nap...
When's the last time you did?
Until the fourth of this month,
it was when I was a little kid.

Take it easy...
We all have hard times in life.
But do you really want to focus
on all your pain and strife?

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Peach_follows

Wait a minute... Are you trying to imply that you havent napped since childhood, until the forth of this month????....... Yeah right...
I sure hope you just threw that in there as somethin' just to perk up the poem.

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bratling

It was kinda...lazy. Like you wanted to write but couldn't find the insperation properly. And you lie about not napping. You nap all the time dork face.

atomik_sprout

Actually, the nap I took on the fourth was my first nap in a long time. I maybe take a couple of naps here and there, but the last GOOD nap I had was when I was little.

Anywho, thanks ladies, for reading my poem. And you're right, Chan. I was writing for the sake of writing. It's been so long since I wrote something, I just felt like I needed to, y'know?

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bratling

Yep. I get that way a lot. Most of the time I just don't finish them at all. So yeah. I liked it. It just seemed forced. A little anyways. I suppose this is a really hard subject for you to adress and all cus of how you feel about the whole Situation.

atomik_sprout

Eh, I never really considered that as a factor when I wrote this. I should've, then I'd have an even better poem. But I just did it for the sake of writing. My next one will be better... I hope. >_<

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