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    To Take me..

    Longing for your touch
    The never ending feeling
    Surrounded me completely
    Knowing you are near

    Longing too see you
    Watching you smile
    Suns light hitting your face
    Sensing the happiness inside

    Longing to hold you
    Feel your warmth
    Showing how much I care
    Never letting go

    Longing for the kiss
    Showing how we feel
    Knowing its just one step
    To take me into your arms

    Please tell me what you think.
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    Re: To Take me..

    The eternal love remake, I think a love poem is written every quarter second on Earth and I'm certain I'm not exaggerating. Love is probably what makes most people feel something more than ordinary life and even if some haven't lived it, they might none the less appreciate the feeling that comes from those who are in love. I personally have only felt love to a certain degree so I can't fully understand it, but often love brings a lot of positive words and that's what I prefer in any form of writting.

    Yours isn't too long, but it transmits well the message, I hope you do often fall into the arms of the one you love

    P.S.: Been a while since I haven't had a chat with you, still as random as ever or has love tamed the beast?
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    Re: To Take me..

    Thank you for your comment. Its just a poem i wrote from the heart...i know it sounds cheesy but its true. I can't wait to see him and fall into his arms.

    ps.i am always on msn..so just bug me there lol.
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    Re: To Take me..

    Wow that was amazing... i loved it and I'm happy to see that you are happy again. But I'm kinda of curious of who this person is...

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