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    Taking One's Leave

    There you go, depressing crap is all that I can write but here you go people I am open to whatever you have to say...

    Taking One's Leave
    As the open nothingness of my soul,
    that would occour,
    with the delierious horror,
    of my girl beingtaken from me,
    it's like a long agony as I await,
    my slow dreadful sentence of death,
    waiting as the blac robed judges,
    decide my fate,
    hoping for that hopeful aspect of charity that never came,
    this... that is a concept of human torture,
    with one hope that I could glimpse,
    the slender form of a whie angle,
    coming to save me from my torture,
    but sadly I have to live with,
    the deadly nausea of being alone
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: Taking One's Leave

    Wow. Except for the typos and lack of periods? This has to be one of my fav poems here at AO. The flow is beautiful and I love the wording.
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    Re: Taking One's Leave

    well thats good and thanks for the comment...I cant believe that it was actually liked by the leader of the Poem Clan
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: Taking One's Leave

    Aw, very beautiful yet saddening poem. I don't think I like my Kaine to be all depressed though...yes, indeed it's a nice poem but cheer up will you? =/ For me?

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