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Reply With Quotecooool one nice i love it but there is a little sex there but it's too nice ...keep up ...
Warning: This does contain sexaul influence (however you want to say it.). So don't read ahead if you dislike these types. Although it is nothing big....but you get the idea.
We venture through night
No rest, no sleep and
Through the sheets
Our lips will meet
We toss and turn until the break of day
Our adventure ends as the night will fade.
But at the likes of love all this will seem,
Our Tales Of Night
We compare to dreams
But because of love
I now wait for
The night to come together
Like my lips with yours.
This poem isn't at all elaborate, yet I like it the way it is (Even though its revision is still undergoing.). All you have to do is read between the lines. Overall, this is my latest poem.
cooool one nice i love it but there is a little sex there but it's too nice ...keep up ...
Foolish beating
Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I know it as suggestive sexaul themes, but it; at least it's not graphic (lol).
nice
even though it suggests something more its not vulgar and it stay very romantic
Yes indeed, romance is the key. To tell you the truth my boyfriend first had a lead on this. He told me one night that he wanted to write a poem about love and so on....but I beat him to it (Take that!).
~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
I love your imagination and the way you used that text to prove your pont even more. Good job.
Thank you very much and I did like the text myself...I felt it was very suitable for the poem. Imagination...is a great thing to have, if you know how to use it well.
~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
sweet poem it was a lovely way to describe two people making love without be so detailed.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
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