Tales of the Night

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 25, 2007, 12:36 AM

Warning: This does contain sexaul influence (however you want to say it.). So don't read ahead if you dislike these types. Although it is nothing big....but you get the idea.

We venture through night
No rest, no sleep and
Through the sheets
Our lips will meet
We toss and turn until the break of day
Our adventure ends as the night will fade.
But at the likes of love all this will seem,
Our Tales Of Night
We compare to dreams
But because of love
I now wait for
The night to come together
Like my lips with yours.

This poem isn't at all elaborate, yet I like it the way it is (Even though its revision is still undergoing.). All you have to do is read between the lines. Overall, this is my latest poem.

xxoxx · Apr 25, 2007, 12:52 AM

cooool one nice i love it but there is a little sex there but it's too nice ...keep up ...

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 25, 2007, 01:07 AM

Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I know it as suggestive sexaul themes, but it; at least it's not graphic (lol).

!KimiFemi · Apr 25, 2007, 09:49 PM

nice
even though it suggests something more its not vulgar and it stay very romantic

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 25, 2007, 09:53 PM

Yes indeed, romance is the key. To tell you the truth my boyfriend first had a lead on this. He told me one night that he wanted to write a poem about love and so on....but I beat him to it (Take that!).

!Rave_Grip · Apr 26, 2007, 12:13 AM

I love your imagination and the way you used that text to prove your pont even more. Good job.

Lady Asphyxia · Apr 26, 2007, 12:53 AM

Thank you very much and I did like the text myself...I felt it was very suitable for the poem. Imagination...is a great thing to have, if you know how to use it well.

*CherryBlossom18* · Apr 28, 2007, 03:23 AM

sweet poem it was a lovely way to describe two people making love without be so detailed.

Apr 25, 2007, 12:36 AM	#1 (permalink)
Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Tales of the Night Warning: This does contain sexaul influence (however you want to say it.). So don't read ahead if you dislike these types. Although it is nothing big....but you get the idea. We venture through night No rest, no sleep and Through the sheets Our lips will meet We toss and turn until the break of day Our adventure ends as the night will fade. But at the likes of love all this will seem, Our Tales Of Night We compare to dreams But because of love I now wait for The night to come together Like my lips with yours. This poem isn't at all elaborate, yet I like it the way it is (Even though its revision is still undergoing.). All you have to do is read between the lines. Overall, this is my latest poem.
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Apr 25, 2007, 12:52 AM	#2 (permalink)
xxoxx Otaku Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo-Japan. Posts: 486 Thanks: 12 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night cooool one nice i love it but there is a little sex there but it's too nice ...keep up ...
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Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I know it as suggestive sexaul themes, but it; at least it's not graphic (lol).
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!KimiFemi Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 483 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night nice even though it suggests something more its not vulgar and it stay very romantic
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Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night Yes indeed, romance is the key. To tell you the truth my boyfriend first had a lead on this. He told me one night that he wanted to write a poem about love and so on....but I beat him to it (Take that!). __________________ ~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
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!Rave_Grip Banned Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,431 Thanks: 2 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night I love your imagination and the way you used that text to prove your pont even more. Good job.
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Lady Asphyxia Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In your dreams Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night Thank you very much and I did like the text myself...I felt it was very suitable for the poem. Imagination...is a great thing to have, if you know how to use it well. __________________ ~Obviously you can't chat about anything...even if you explain yourself~
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	Re: Tales of the Night sweet poem it was a lovely way to describe two people making love without be so detailed. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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