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    Tales of renewal

    Good day everyone, I just noticed this place up and I felt like renewing with "Tales of the past" that I created long ago...in 2003-2004 probably (on AL though, but they banned any form of poetry because of an EMO hatrad thingy on their forum and thought I was EMO...which I am not, more of a big thinker XD), one automn/december night after having strange feelings brewing about. So I'll probably be posting here once and a while.

    Last time I had invited to write anything that came to their minds using simply inspiration and near-spontaneous writting. I mostly don't think too much before posting a writting, poem or anything, unless I want it to rhyme SO here I so dub this thread my domain and you are all welcome to coment, write your own thoughts as well as suggest things on the fly to better this place.

    Rules:

    1. Don't write things simply to goof off, try to have a meaning in what you write if you consider writting here.

    2. I don't know what to add next so it'll be for another time, let's start writting XD



    A girl saw within


    I drink endlessly upon a flock of ideas,
    Mending my body to rely only upon its own.
    I trap feelings that respond to others,
    Having none for me to create.

    Yet I seek out the truth on my endless journey,
    Every new experience makes me stronger.
    I overcome the difficulties of life on every corner,
    Creating milestones on which to build upon.

    Eventually I attain my goals that had been desired,
    The reasons in which by beliefs are founded.
    I walk proud of my achievements,
    None the less I still ponder eternally upon my fate.


    Note: The title explains where the ideas come from and the rest is of thinking about myself(next writting will be more light hearted, promise), cya soon and take care all people of AO XD
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Hey Soldat!! Very nice lyrical poem, though don't explain it too much before we read it as a poem is meant for the reader's own interpretation as much as it is for the writer's implied meaning . It has been a while since I read a good lyrical poem (and I suck at writing them) so this was a nice change for me. As someone who loves to think and ponder his self I can real relate to this, thank you for sharing this work!


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    Re: Tales of renewal

    hey soldat nice seeing you! very nice poem! Hope you get another poem up soon or perhaps a story could lay in your wake as well!

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Thanks Midnight_Moonlight and Chiefblackhammer for your comments, happy I've already been noticed XD

    So here's my next writting that came to mind if I can just remember it all...damn de-logging and all:

    Interpretation

    To feel or truly understand a meaning,
    Never attainable at many occasions.
    As simple as may be something,
    Neutralilty in it rarily happens.

    Feelings expressed towards others,
    Entwined they are within their expression.
    Often misconceptions are created by interpretations,
    Disagrements follow within a discussion.

    Upon another light of this momentum,
    When people try to know the truth.
    Minds collide to find themselves numb,
    In front of what remains a place of doubt absolute.



    *Huffs and puffs* that wasn't easy, its not like the original and far from it, but I'm quite satisfied of the result, hope to see a few others comment on this and maybe write something in consequence, I might write again before going to bed, but in between, I'll be trying to meet up with old aquaintances if its not too late...hmmm...kind of is but I can still give it a try. Cya for now and till next I write

    Note: I really don't like this quick paced de-logging, almost lost all my text again, good thing I saved it on a .txt before pressing the save button XD
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    My favorite philosopher:
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    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Wow when I read your Peoms I'm lost in the words (Which is indeed a good thing)
    Different Emotions comprised into awsome Rythmatic words.
    You totally Rock^^
    Keep it up...Can't Wait to hear another.

    Thanks Pyroo. :]

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    The King or queen of big words. *phew* Had to sound out some words. But I thought that they were good.
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Renewal

    Upon my leap inside this place,
    Nostalgia comes forth strongly.
    Within this place remains the same,
    Same old place that brings true joy.
    Feelings mixed within my mind,
    Burst out to offer my joy to all.

    Inside a nutshell I come forth,
    Expressing without hidden thoughts no not ever.
    Every step forward I renew my becoming,
    Only to dissapear again once more.
    To show gratitude evermore,
    Brings me back to this old place.

    Surrounded by many who are similar,
    Cosy and warm they make me feel.
    Eerie and strange some may be,
    But so am I when fatigue comes to me.
    I close this window of inspiration right here,
    To come back again another day.




    So good night AO and hope to see you again at my awakening or later on when I have time to check up on you
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    My favorite philosopher:
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    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
    Poetry Corner CLICK HERE IF YOU KNOW ME

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    cool...my grammer is waaaaay worse than urs lol...wish i had tat vocab....rocks!

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