Thread: Tales of renewal

Hey Soldat!! Very nice lyrical poem, though don't explain it too much before we read it as a poem is meant for the reader's own interpretation as much as it is for the writer's implied meaning . It has been a while since I read a good lyrical poem (and I suck at writing them) so this was a nice change for me. As someone who loves to think and ponder his self I can real relate to this, thank you for sharing this work!

hey soldat nice seeing you! very nice poem! Hope you get another poem up soon or perhaps a story could lay in your wake as well!

Thanks Midnight_Moonlight and Chiefblackhammer for your comments, happy I've already been noticed XD

So here's my next writting that came to mind if I can just remember it all...damn de-logging and all:

Interpretation

To feel or truly understand a meaning,
Never attainable at many occasions.
As simple as may be something,
Neutralilty in it rarily happens.

Feelings expressed towards others,
Entwined they are within their expression.
Often misconceptions are created by interpretations,
Disagrements follow within a discussion.

Upon another light of this momentum,
When people try to know the truth.
Minds collide to find themselves numb,
In front of what remains a place of doubt absolute.


*Huffs and puffs* that wasn't easy, its not like the original and far from it, but I'm quite satisfied of the result, hope to see a few others comment on this and maybe write something in consequence, I might write again before going to bed, but in between, I'll be trying to meet up with old aquaintances if its not too late...hmmm...kind of is but I can still give it a try. Cya for now and till next I write

Note: I really don't like this quick paced de-logging, almost lost all my text again, good thing I saved it on a .txt before pressing the save button XD

Wow when I read your Peoms I'm lost in the words (Which is indeed a good thing)
Different Emotions comprised into awsome Rythmatic words.
You totally Rock^^
Keep it up...Can't Wait to hear another.

The King or queen of big words. *phew* Had to sound out some words. But I thought that they were good.

Renewal

Upon my leap inside this place,
Nostalgia comes forth strongly.
Within this place remains the same,
Same old place that brings true joy.
Feelings mixed within my mind,
Burst out to offer my joy to all.

Inside a nutshell I come forth,
Expressing without hidden thoughts no not ever.
Every step forward I renew my becoming,
Only to dissapear again once more.
To show gratitude evermore,
Brings me back to this old place.

Surrounded by many who are similar,
Cosy and warm they make me feel.
Eerie and strange some may be,
But so am I when fatigue comes to me.
I close this window of inspiration right here,
To come back again another day.



So good night AO and hope to see you again at my awakening or later on when I have time to check up on you

cool...my grammer is waaaaay worse than urs lol...wish i had tat vocab....rocks!