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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life
    Randomness

    Flying by the eternal skies,
    Growing older as time flies.
    Treading along random paths,
    Going where you need to fast.
    Accumulating strain upon yourself,
    Endlessly life is taken away as a theft.

    Cowering before yet another crime,
    Distancing yourself in the face of time.
    Yielding to the simple path,
    Where you will inevitably recieve the shortcut's wrath.
    Filling your experience of unresolved mistakes,
    Letting yourself flow in a mirror of fakes.

    Ending abruptly I must do,
    Life cannot wait for what I will undo.
    Leaving behind what is unfinished,
    Quitting as what remains is quenched.
    Riddles and mysteries leading to truths,
    Holding back the enigma that lurks in our roots...


    Something I just wrote in two parts, once before going with some friends, the other after the night is over. Though I wrote this after being influenced by writting anything that I felt like from another forum, I found it fun enough to show it here too :P

    Nighty Night and don't let the bed bugs bite
    The one in bold, italic and underlined....is MY line XD I said it first
    Anyways, sorry for not posting last time. I managed to found your thread again^^

    I like the fact that this one rhymes It has a real smooth flow to it.
    Again with the title, it would be nicer if it was named as good as your work is XD
    Overall, from what I've noticed...your poems seem short but yet when you read it, it's sorta long. lol. Just a fact I've noticed

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    RPG Lord and Master/Poet Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life's Avatar
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Flirting with life

    Wave a hand at a stranger,
    Live a moment full of mystery.
    Solve a riddly in your mind,
    Answered before you could imagine.
    Forget all that you've learned,
    Waiting for something to occur.

    Silenced tears resound all around,
    An icy breath leaks a bloody sentiment.
    Taming oneself before it is too late,
    Death does not come to those who desire it.
    Fear without a doubt of the mind,
    Flickering into reality the shadows come forth.

    Why do we always misunderstand?
    What makes us what we are?
    Do we truly learn to desire?
    Will we ever know the truth?
    Whatever comes is in the future,
    Faraway or beyond the corner of your life.



    This came from somewhere xD
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    My favorite philosopher:
    Hassun

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Found it ^^ I heard that you are a great writer/poet Soldat-san!! I didn't have time to read all of your poems but I will read them soon but i read your last poem. It is great. I like the way how to use great vocabulary and write everyday, easily readable poems. hehe. ^^ I love these lines:

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life
    Silenced tears resound all around,
    An icy breath leaks a bloody sentiment.
    Taming oneself before it is too late,
    Death does not come to those who desire it.
    Fear without a doubt of the mind,
    Flickering into reality the shadows come forth.
    Keep it up. ^^''
    *^-^* Thank you SasuraiHell *^-^*


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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Wave a hand at a stranger,
    Live a moment full of mystery.
    Solve a riddly in your mind,
    Answered before you could imagine.
    Sorry bro! ^^;;; I always fail to post here ><
    That was my favourite part and a good way to start a poem. It gives the reader the urge to read on Your vocab never seems to fail to make me feel like mine sucks alot T.T XD ^^;;;

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