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    o.o new style....nt bad.....me likey....

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Before I post my comments, I have a question to ask you. I really liked the poem that you entitled as Tantra, but do you know what Tantra is about? Is there a connection to the real Tantra?

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    I truly had no idea of its true meaning, I thought it was about a violent phenomenon and not what I just read at the moment...
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life
    I truly had no idea of its true meaning, I thought it was about a violent phenomenon and not what I just read at the moment...
    Tantra is a violent phenomenon? Westerner misunderstand the concept since they don't have good roots to teach them. It is spiritual; it talks about energy, energy channels by chakra concept, yoga, meditation, life, and even more encompassing ideas. Most Asians should be exposed to tantra. In Japan, they practice tantra a lot. I am sure Kedar knows about this since he works in a temple.

    Anyway. You wrote some really good poems. They carry much meaning. Keep up the work, and write some more.
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    I like your new style. I like both I of them. I like your poems.
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Fading Words

    Shadows lurk about the land,
    They are not te be misguided.
    Life shudders as it is restrained,
    Not knowing where to exist.
    Fallen before its greatest challenge,
    Dissipating under eternal regret.

    Deviding ever more life sparks anew,
    Searching for a beacon to grasp upon.
    A torch fueled by its existence,
    Moves about not yet dismissed.
    Shining brightly it shows the way,
    Salvation is upon its stand.

    Upon a mount of greater rage,
    Its soul mourns past defeats.
    Elements that bind it and combine,
    The light grows stronger even more.
    Lastly set on another standing point,
    It won't forget what it has learned.


    i wrote this to the person who refused me of joining a story that I could of done well I think...I guess to let out a bit of steam, nothing mean, just showing my determination is all XD



    Kedar has inspired me with his happyness thread in a second XD


    Happyness, I sure do like that word.

    I could even write a poem with that word....


    Happyness

    Endeavors to be unlike any other,
    Simple none the less to begin the journey.
    Hard may it be to remain on its path,
    Finding the key to remain even more.
    Search for it you must as it won't come on its own,
    Accept yourself and it shall be revealed.

    Along the road met you shall,
    Many good times where joy remains.
    Saddness may visit from time to time,
    But nothing is eternal upon this path.
    Renewing your direction is but a basic step,
    Upon finding what is truly desired.

    When despair becomes even clearer,
    The true path remains hidden away.
    As time seems to end before your very eyes,
    You cannot find what you so yearn for.
    But as you go beyond your feelings and get back up,
    Happyness tends a hand to help you back up again.


    I'll post it in my poems section to keep them all in one spot.

    How does one become happy? By making accompishments in life.

    How does one boast happyness? By going on, being encouraged and motived to do more accomplishments.

    Simple and short, I could give examples but that'll come another time maybe XD
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    Re: Tales of renewal

    yay! i succesfully read ur poems!!! 1st time! lolx, no offence...well KINDA read it..
    didnt really read it SERIOUSLY...coz...my mind isnt with me at the moment...but it's nc...

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    Re: Tales of renewal

    Shakugan no Shana (inspired by this series)

    Inside the heap of power,
    Joint streght is born.
    Below the vision of faith,
    Thinking relies on its own.
    Relentless the feeling of certainty,
    Rightiously falling back to grow to greater heights.

    Entering a new stage where duality is born,
    Love grants power eternal as it shines brightly.
    Aspiring to form a single entity,
    Fighting beyond what is possible.
    The final act is upon the one who desires,
    Acting upon duty of fulfillment.

    Shattering is what awaits the weak,
    Relentless among others all around.
    The strong survive to bring another day,
    Keeping their beliefs in their hearts.
    Ending the last moment of truth,
    Peace is finally attained in the depths of all that exists.





    Dancing lights

    Hazzy feelings coming forth,
    Everything turning and turning.
    Realising the meaning of life,
    Knowing the secret of things.
    A world beyond the truth,
    Senses lowering to that effect.

    Shaking body and empty mind,
    Falling apart by overflowing things.
    Destroying all around you,
    Not knowing how to release yourself.
    Noticing too late that the harm was done,
    Being alone to face the facts.

    Pleasure gashing from every pore,
    The body releasing its strain.
    Having more to increase the effect,
    Going further away from reality.
    Falling after all is done,
    Done living on this world...


    I wanted to describe a few effects that drugs might do, I may not have felt much as I rarely take a drink, but I've seen some things from other people.
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