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    Tangle of confusion...

    Yesterday I thought about what you said,
    About how you think about me all day long,
    And it made my feet feel heavy
    And my mind- dizzy

    There are times when I think I’m all over you,
    Yet there are moments when I prove to me wrong,
    Like moments when I think there’s no use of staying awake
    No use because you are not there.

    Sometimes I think I long only for those hugs of yours
    But then why am I so in love with how nice you are?
    I’m sure I don’t love you enough to be by your side
    Yet I’m always looking forward to meeting you.

    No, this is not just a love poem,
    Nor is this something to show how sad I am...
    This is a big tangle of confusion-
    Come and try to untie and figure it out…

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Tangle of confusion...

    very tangled indeed @.@ sheesh can't untie it...hmmm -.-

    nice poem.. ^^

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    Re: Tangle of confusion...

    Nice to hear that...thank You Ray! ^^ So, if you can't untie it, who can?

    But it was rated with one star... one! it means: "Terrible"! *laughs hitericaly* hah!!! ^^ who did that? he has made me smile for this whole day!!!! ^^ LOL

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Tangle of confusion...

    Great poem Lasura! I like it indeed really! Just cause well it actually is confusing as you can say well thats if you understand but I loved it so I hope to see more!
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    Yes Kuwi, I knowwhat you mean... it is confusing just as I am ^^

    Thank You!!! I'm really happy you like it ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Tangle of confusion...

    i love this poem it made me think for the first time this summer and i untangled it within seconds i love the poem lasura always delivers great work

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    Lol!!! ^^ "think for the first time this summer"!!!! I'm glad it did otherways you could become mad...

    Really!? You untangled it? @.@ Even I could not... so...what did you see?

    And Thank You!!! ^^ I don't... *blushes*

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Tangle of confusion...

    i think that its about someone moving away and that last day and the day after that and it tells how they rember he or her and the thoughts of him or her is keeping him or her going but once i love the poem

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