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    Tanha Dil...

    Wild pain, gushing through my veins
    The scent of love like spring roses
    Elegant as a winter rose
    Plagued by non-exultancy, caused allergic tears to fall

    Same old cliché – “WHY did this happen to me?”
    Why does path of true love never runs smooth!
    You cried your life out for me
    And I could not make you feel better

    I want you to be safe, happy, warm and loved
    Maybe our distances could not bring us closer
    Or we WERE supposed to keep apart
    A dream, which will never come true

    I love you my girl, not by lust but by my heart and emotions
    After all this pain, why do my eyes search for you?
    Because I want you in my arms
    Holding hands, afraid to loose control

    I don’t know where the path would lead me, let alone us
    Your warmth beside me, only from you with me
    Your sweet scent dissolving into my essence
    But I wasn’t exactly the one to be with you

    It won’t BE a Romeo and Juliet ending
    Because we will both live
    You might get lost but I am always here for you
    This heart longs for you.

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    Re: Tanha Dil...

    aww that poem its sooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (^__^ )10/10

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    Re: Tanha Dil...

    another big rating my my... girls is easily "fooled" with poems like this

    sheesh the ending of romeo and juliet wuld be better than like this... because
    u guys can't see each other whilst romeo and juliet still can after death.. ;p

    a good poem man... ^^

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