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    Tear Away

    runing faster and faster
    trying to get away

    can't you see
    there's a reason

    i can't seem to get far away
    each and everyday

    i don't really want this

    everything happens for a reason
    and i just don't know

    my hands filled with my tears
    my ears are filled with my cries
    and my eyes are filled with my thought

    questions aren't answered
    becuase i just can't seem to see everything around me

    i never felt alive
    i'm always here to hide

    the things i need i cannot have
    and the things i want are so evil and bad

    my mind is the only thing that keeps control
    from everything they'll ever know

    i wonder
    does it make you happy
    does it make you laugh
    the way you see me

    i wish to say
    this someday

    under everything
    there is something that you can't see

    my thoughts
    my feelings
    and my will

    even if i cry
    and have my eyes tear away allday
    i will find my way
    someday
    without you or they
    i will tear away
    in this rainy day
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: Tear Away

    very awesome poem i like you are interacting with
    the reader i almst waned to respond to everything you said
    i really got caught up in this poem and how question the
    the reader also about your emotion wich i think is great
    i felt guilty after reading this poem . i cant wait t read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Tear Away

    Nice poem man, this is the koolest peom of yours so far.

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