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![]() ![]() | Tear Away runing faster and faster trying to get away can't you see there's a reason i can't seem to get far away each and everyday i don't really want this everything happens for a reason and i just don't know my hands filled with my tears my ears are filled with my cries and my eyes are filled with my thought questions aren't answered becuase i just can't seem to see everything around me i never felt alive i'm always here to hide the things i need i cannot have and the things i want are so evil and bad my mind is the only thing that keeps control from everything they'll ever know i wonder does it make you happy does it make you laugh the way you see me i wish to say this someday under everything there is something that you can't see my thoughts my feelings and my will even if i cry and have my eyes tear away allday i will find my way someday without you or they i will tear away in this rainy day
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![]() ![]() | Re: Tear Away very awesome poem i like you are interacting with the reader i almst waned to respond to everything you said i really got caught up in this poem and how question the the reader also about your emotion wich i think is great i felt guilty after reading this poem . i cant wait t read another
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![]() ![]() | Re: Tear Away Nice poem man, this is the koolest peom of yours so far.
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