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    "tears"

    You don't even notice,
    The pain in my eyes,
    Even though the smile on my face
    Is my only disguise.

    So I'll hide my tears
    Then i'll cry all alone,
    No hand to hold onto,
    Because this pain is unknown.

    So I will go now,
    With a smile on my face
    Hiding it all,
    Leaving a tear without a trace.

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    Re: "tears"

    I hide behind smiles, rocks, shadows, anger, rage...... I'll hide my pain behind anything but it always seems like glass for me. Everyone can see right through it. As of today, Im done hiding.
    Nice poem, It pissed me off.... in a good way,
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    It is wonderful... short and simple.. yet it says so much... It really is good.. it tells us of what so many people do when they get hurt..

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    Re: "tears"

    It sounds like the poem is saying that they hide thier feelings. I always do that weather I am angery, sad, or crying I make sure I doin't show any emotions on my face. I like your poem shows how some people feel.

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    awww that was like sooo sad and deep and the flow was like perfect and it was
    like wow!.lol.

    I love it. Keep it up.
    Hope to see more.^.^

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    Re: "tears"

    awww such a sad poem .... i do that too s dont worry ^^

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    sad poem.very emotional.very good. cant wait to see more kk?keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥^^
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