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    Tears

    All my tears dried up
    and so has my love for you.
    A rose withering silently
    that’s not me anymore.
    My dreams have been reborn
    and you’re not included.
    I fell for you
    but I grew new wings
    for me to soar.
    A bright sunrise,
    a new beginning.
    No more stormy nights
    for me to despair.
    My eyes are wide open
    not blindfolded like before
    I’ve seen your deceptions.

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    Re: Tears

    this was a sweet poem to read^^ but it kinda threw me off with the flow at the end. i liked it so nice job :2thumbs
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    Re: Tears

    Thank you. Here's another one I wrote. I got inspired by Inuyasha and Kagome.It's still untitled though...

    You're so special,
    the way you look at me,
    the way you smile at me
    You make me feel like nothing is impossible
    As our lips brush and finally meet,
    you say my name so sweetly
    that it makes my heart soar
    I love you...

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    Re: Tears

    Quote Originally Posted by hanyougirl2010 View Post
    Thank you. Here's another one I wrote. I got inspired by Inuyasha and Kagome.It's still untitled though...

    You're so special,
    the way you look at me,
    the way you smile at me
    You make me feel like nothing is impossible
    As our lips brush and finally meet,
    you say my name so sweetly
    that it makes my heart soar
    I love you...
    awww its so simple but directly to the point ^^ ya know you should of made this a seperate post but thats fine^^ again i like it. maybe if you add a bit more detail you can make it into some time of story so ppl get your meaning more
    but agian nice job
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    Re: Tears

    I liked your poem...
    It shows you moved on...
    And didnt stayed in the past...
    Keep it up with poems girl...^_^..
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