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Reply With Quotethis was a sweet poem to read^^ but it kinda threw me off with the flow at the end. i liked it so nice job :2thumbs
All my tears dried up
and so has my love for you.
A rose withering silently
that’s not me anymore.
My dreams have been reborn
and you’re not included.
I fell for you
but I grew new wings
for me to soar.
A bright sunrise,
a new beginning.
No more stormy nights
for me to despair.
My eyes are wide open
not blindfolded like before
I’ve seen your deceptions.
this was a sweet poem to read^^ but it kinda threw me off with the flow at the end. i liked it so nice job :2thumbs
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
Thank you. Here's another one I wrote. I got inspired by Inuyasha and Kagome.It's still untitled though...
You're so special,
the way you look at me,
the way you smile at me
You make me feel like nothing is impossible
As our lips brush and finally meet,
you say my name so sweetly
that it makes my heart soar
I love you...
awww its so simple but directly to the point ^^ ya know you should of made this a seperate post but thats fine^^ again i like it. maybe if you add a bit more detail you can make it into some time of story so ppl get your meaning moreOriginally Posted by hanyougirl2010
but agian nice job
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest
I liked your poem...
It shows you moved on...
And didnt stayed in the past...
Keep it up with poems girl...^_^..
We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...
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