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Reply With Quotenice poem zainab^^
it makes sence for me and it almost put me into tears.
anyway keep up the good work and hope to see more from you
Tears Of Blood B.L.O.O.D T.E.A.R.S
I want to rip out your heart
and shred it apart,
Holding it in front of you,
Watching the blood dripping
through my hands it melts
and my blood tears shed,
You've stained my eyes
with ten shades of Red
Each one of my tear
will become your fear,
Each drop of my blood
will drown you in a flood
But now I hate you
because you lie
and I will always hate you
until I die
So wait for me
when I am dead,
I will do something
that I would never regret
Leaving my bloody heart on your bed.
-z.a.i.n.a.b
I just felt bored at school so i scribbled this rubbish down in my copy. X3 and it doesn't make sence...
nice poem zainab^^
it makes sence for me and it almost put me into tears.
anyway keep up the good work and hope to see more from you
"If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert
Made sense to me! Had alot of good imagery. and a nice flow.
"So wait for me
when I am dead,
I will do something
that I would never regret
Leaving my bloody heart on your bed"
That part had alot of symbolic meaning to it... I like that you chose to say "on your bed". As opposed to "in your hands". The bed seems soo much more intimate.
... Not Ever Again...
But tears of blood are a GOOD thing!
its really really good sis, very sad, but has a really good flow. cant wait to hear more
wow this is simply amazing!!! it has a good flow through the line/stanzas. i love it a lot and ur very good at the details.
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xD hassun...
i gotta agree with u guys..it's nicely done..gr8 job ^^
i like ur style... u combined more than 1 type of poem too ^^ *the way u rhymed* Keep up the good work ^^
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