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Reply With Quotethis one is really good. i like all of your poems. but this one is exceptional. i can feel the hatred and understand how to you this person worths nothing anymore. And..that you moved on. great job!
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We won't ever see eachother again,
not since the day that you left.
It's not so hard to understand,
why did you ran away.
I wanted to apologize,
for so many things i didn't do,
i didn't realize,
what you put me through.
But now that i'm aware,
of all the pain you made me bare,
i'm gonna make you stare,
as I walk away.
Maybe it's better like this,
hate me,
i don't care at all,
if i am cold.
I cannot cover this scars,
permanent this damage is,
forever they will last.
Now i decided that my dignity,
will never come last.
It's better like this,
hate me,
remember how easy can it be.
I suffered too much,
all of this pain,
my tears have an end.
Now that i have the strength,
i will feel callous until my end.
Last edited by KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR; Sep 18, 2006 at 03:02 PM.
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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this one is really good. i like all of your poems. but this one is exceptional. i can feel the hatred and understand how to you this person worths nothing anymore. And..that you moved on. great job!
I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
Colorful stylez
I really like this poem, because it's interesting and very sad. <-< Mreh', obviously. But however, I enjoyed the description and the choice of words.
i think this poem is great, is sad and at the same time it shows a lot of feelings.
keep writing i think you are great.
Gah I think this is depressing.... please dont be emo now!!! lol jus a joke for yagood peom thou :P
thank you all for your comments, i'm glad you liked it, and i'm not an emo just to clear that out XD
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
Awesome KuRuMi!!!
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