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    Tears have an end...

    We won't ever see eachother again,
    not since the day that you left.
    It's not so hard to understand,
    why did you ran away.

    I wanted to apologize,
    for so many things i didn't do,
    i didn't realize,
    what you put me through.
    But now that i'm aware,
    of all the pain you made me bare,
    i'm gonna make you stare,
    as I walk away.
    Maybe it's better like this,
    hate me,
    i don't care at all,
    if i am cold.

    I cannot cover this scars,
    permanent this damage is,
    forever they will last.
    Now i decided that my dignity,
    will never come last.
    It's better like this,
    hate me,
    remember how easy can it be.

    I suffered too much,
    all of this pain,
    my tears have an end.

    Now that i have the strength,
    i will feel callous until my end.
    Last edited by KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR; Sep 18, 2006 at 03:02 PM.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: Tears have an end...

    this one is really good. i like all of your poems. but this one is exceptional. i can feel the hatred and understand how to you this person worths nothing anymore. And..that you moved on. great job!
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
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    Re: Tears have an end...

    I really like this poem, because it's interesting and very sad. <-< Mreh', obviously. But however, I enjoyed the description and the choice of words.

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    Re: Tears have an end...

    i think this poem is great, is sad and at the same time it shows a lot of feelings.
    keep writing i think you are great.

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    Re: Tears have an end...

    Gah I think this is depressing.... please dont be emo now!!! lol jus a joke for ya good peom thou :P

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    Re: Tears have an end...

    thank you all for your comments, i'm glad you liked it, and i'm not an emo just to clear that out XD
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: Tears have an end...

    Awesome KuRuMi!!! I sooooo loved it!! I just loved the strong emotions coming from your poem,I could soo feel them! Awesome job KuRuMi!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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