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    Tears from Heaven

    >,< i wrote this when i was studying for me exams lol , you know i should studied at that time ^^ but i am glad i didn't LOL
    i know i am not good and i write poems as a hobby >,< so sorry if it was so bad !!

    I know what does it feel ...
    I will never make you shed a tear if that was in my hand
    I know you have been crying in the coldest corner
    It is not my fault you drown in the ocean of sadness and that's now were you belong
    I am sorry i flew away taking all your laughes
    I can see your broken smile
    your broken soul
    I used to be your home and now am gone
    I can see you play the piano silently
    Because you know every sound reminds you fo me
    You are trying to forget what turned you to ash
    I know what you feel
    I know it deep inside
    I know that i have hurt you
    I know that you are mad
    I wish i can change the time
    You have to live with it just like that

    .... =^_^=
    My Dreams Become Like The Rainbow
    Love Like the Wind You Can't See It But You Can Feel It

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    Hey not bad I like it you did very good keep it up girl!

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    ur pome is very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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