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    Re: tears i cry

    Wow,I liked it.It's sad but still good
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: tears i cry

    I think this poem is kinda emoish, awesome poem, keep it up.

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    Re: tears i cry

    aw im so touch i feel so sad huhuhuhu i feel your sorrow good poem i like it

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    Re: tears i cry

    wow...just wow

    I love writing like that also,

    keep it up

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    Re: tears i cry

    Quote Originally Posted by tupacs_wifey View Post
    the tears i cry are almost gone
    ive cried them all away
    so why do i feel this way
    every day depressed and hurt
    feeling like my hearts been ripped out
    the tears i cry are gone who ever took them
    stole my soul
    now im empty
    the tears ive cried are gone

    I've never noticed you on here before... you really Holder's little sis?
    Well anyway.. the poem had feeling, but you need a bit of writing practice.

    I see the potential here though... that is why I'd really like to see more from you.

    BTW... I relate quite strongly to your situation. PM me if you'd like to talk. Im going to check your profile now... just because I'm diggin the name "tupac's wifey". Im a Pac fan myself.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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