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    Re: tears i cry

    This poem has short lines put it gaves the reader emotions of pain.
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    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: tears i cry

    Nice poem, lost. Nice tribute. It was meaningful. It sounds like it came from the heart, which I'm sure it did. Nice job.

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    Re: tears i cry

    thanx all of ya'll for the comments yo i mean its full of hurt and pain but its my stress relever
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