Tears of pain

A scream in pain such horror
A drop of blood so exciting
A moan full of suffering such pleasure
Dead eyes that stare into the abyss such delight

Everything is gone now not a smile nor regret
Everythng is fine now all thats left is sweat
Everything has its moment and now the moments gone
Everything needs a purpose yours was to die

A prick of the knife and the pain from wich your
crimson full of pain now doest flow.
I now toss it down and watch as you now slowly
decompose.
What most think as grotesk and unimagnable
i see as a way to play .
So join me if you will and maybe your
crimson shall flow just as painfull as the last.

i know the last few lines were a bit long but im still working
on that not sure how to make it shorter yet.but any comments or
suggestions would help thanks and i hope this poem is better than
the last few i have tried

wow first poem I heard from u and is amazing

Makes me kinda thirsty.....................

thanks i was going for a dark theme but wasnt sure how detailed
it should be

If only I had a bloody mary..........................

Wow!!! That was soooooo awesome!! I just loved it!
My fav. part was

"A scream in pain such horror
A drop of blood so exciting
A moan full of suffering such pleasure
Dead eyes that stare into the abyss such delight
"


That was sooo awesome! :)

Who wants a bloody mary???Who's willing to donate?

Nice holderofthedarkchalice! Loved that poem and was that your first poem posted on AO?