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    Tears of pain

    A scream in pain such horror
    A drop of blood so exciting
    A moan full of suffering such pleasure
    Dead eyes that stare into the abyss such delight

    Everything is gone now not a smile nor regret
    Everythng is fine now all thats left is sweat
    Everything has its moment and now the moments gone
    Everything needs a purpose yours was to die

    A prick of the knife and the pain from wich your
    crimson full of pain now doest flow.
    I now toss it down and watch as you now slowly
    decompose.
    What most think as grotesk and unimagnable
    i see as a way to play .
    So join me if you will and maybe your
    crimson shall flow just as painfull as the last.

    i know the last few lines were a bit long but im still working
    on that not sure how to make it shorter yet.but any comments or
    suggestions would help thanks and i hope this poem is better than
    the last few i have tried
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Tears of pain

    wow first poem I heard from u and is amazing


    thank u SasuraiHell
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    Re: Tears of pain

    Makes me kinda thirsty.....................
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
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    Re: Tears of pain

    thanks i was going for a dark theme but wasnt sure how detailed
    it should be
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Tears of pain

    If only I had a bloody mary..........................
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    Re: Tears of pain

    Wow!!! That was soooooo awesome!! I just loved it!
    My fav. part was

    "A scream in pain such horror
    A drop of blood so exciting
    A moan full of suffering such pleasure
    Dead eyes that stare into the abyss such delight
    "


    That was sooo awesome!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Tears of pain

    Who wants a bloody mary???Who's willing to donate?
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    Re: Tears of pain

    Nice holderofthedarkchalice! Loved that poem and was that your first poem posted on AO?
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