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Reply With Quotewow first poem I heard from u and is amazing
A scream in pain such horror
A drop of blood so exciting
A moan full of suffering such pleasure
Dead eyes that stare into the abyss such delight
Everything is gone now not a smile nor regret
Everythng is fine now all thats left is sweat
Everything has its moment and now the moments gone
Everything needs a purpose yours was to die
A prick of the knife and the pain from wich your
crimson full of pain now doest flow.
I now toss it down and watch as you now slowly
decompose.
What most think as grotesk and unimagnable
i see as a way to play .
So join me if you will and maybe your
crimson shall flow just as painfull as the last.
i know the last few lines were a bit long but im still working
on that not sure how to make it shorter yet.but any comments or
suggestions would help thanks and i hope this poem is better than
the last few i have tried
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
wow first poem I heard from u and is amazing
thank u SasuraiHell
go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
Makes me kinda thirsty.....................
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
thanks i was going for a dark theme but wasnt sure how detailed
it should be
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
If only I had a bloody mary..........................
Move Along.
Wow!!! That was soooooo awesome!! I just loved it!
My fav. part was
"A scream in pain such horror
A drop of blood so exciting
A moan full of suffering such pleasure
Dead eyes that stare into the abyss such delight
"
That was sooo awesome!
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
Who wants a bloody mary???Who's willing to donate?
Move Along.
Nice holderofthedarkchalice! Loved that poem and was that your first poem posted on AO?
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