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    Re: Tears of pain

    My eyes are seeing red......Can anyone donate a couple of pints?
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    Re: Tears of pain

    it makes me so hungry I'll be back going to get something to eat*walks out and leaves*
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    Re: Tears of pain

    that was the darkest i have seen so far and it wasreally tite
    at the beginning i thought it was about sex
    but after i read the 2nd part
    i realised it was about pain,but not that kinda way''LOL''

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    Re: Tears of pain

    thanks im glad you liked it
    and in a way pain can be plesure
    as well . its all in how you percive it
    that why i used the crimson pain in that
    one line to sort of show of that. all though
    i am still working on the length so ti want be so drawn out
    near the end. thats my biggest problem right now
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Tears of pain

    Decent Poem. Good job overall ^^

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    Re: Tears of pain

    thanks and hopefully like i said beofre i will figure out how to shorten some line
    that seem to carry over a little. bit i will figure out i think
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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