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    Tears Of Snow

    Tears In The Snow

    As I walk down the snow coverd road,I kept my head down
    Tears begin to well up in my eyes,And i'm afriad to cry
    I keep walkin down the street,In the snowy cold
    This was it,This was the end...

    "The end"

    I start to see my memoires right before my eyes,I blink back the tears
    My vision begins to blur,But I just don't care
    I was all alone,And out in the cold
    So cold I am inside and out,But no one seems to care anymore...

    "Not no more"

    I was happy in your arms that night,But it ended in a fight
    We screamed at each other,Till our throats were raw
    I said some hurtful things,But nothing can change the past
    The look that was in your eyes,Told me that this was goodbye..

    "Hurtful words"

    This is so painful,But I was partly to blame
    I should have been more understanding,And not question everything
    But why did this have to happen,And in the way that it did
    I wish that I could turn back time,But that's just in fairytales...

    "Painful blame"

    My hearts a breakin,And a achein right now
    Without your touch,I can't be whole
    Without your voice,I can't sleep at night
    Not seein your eyes,Makes me tremble inside...

    "I need your smile"

    I take a seat,All alone in a park
    I think of you,And I begin to cry
    I miss you so much already,Was it a mistake?
    I wish that I could take it all back,I need your love more than I need to breathe...

    "I'm so sorry"

    As I walk down the snow coverd road,I kept my head down
    Tears begin to well up in my eyes,And i'm afriad to cry
    I keep walking down the street,In the snowy cold
    This was it,This was the end...

    "The end,it's all over"

    I start to see my memoires right before my eyes,I blink back the tears
    My vision begins to blur,But I just don't care
    I was all alone,And out in the cold
    So cold I am,But no one seems to care anymore...

    "Not no more,Nobody cares"

    I wipe my tears,But they just wont stop
    I turn to my right,And there you are all out of breath
    You grab me and hold me tightly,As you cry and say that your sorry
    I cry along with you and say it's alright,As we kiss in the snow....

    "Thank you for forgiving me.
    I'm no longer cold,not anymore.
    I'm in your arms once again,safe and sound.
    There's nothing else I need to ask for.
    I'm with you once again.".....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Tears Of Snow

    I absolutely love this song Angel! Each line exploding with emotion, and I also love the twist at the end, the beginning seems very sad and then in the end you lost love is standing there apologizing and taking you back into his arms where you feel the safest! You Poem Rocks Angel!!! Keep up the Outstanding work! And know that BlueFox1 is your #1 Fan!!!

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    Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much for the awesome and sweet comment Fox!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you love it so much. Thank you so much again.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Tears Of Snow

    Anytime Angel of mine! You did an awesome job on this song! I'm giving this one a 5 out of 5 Angel!

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    Re: Tears Of Snow

    WooooooooooooooW! Wonderful song you got there, Shini! The title captivated my interest in the first place and your choice of words kept me reading throughout the song! The words in your song are speaking straight and clear to the reader. Keep up the awesome job Shini.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Tears Of Snow

    That was so sweet I almost cried. I could imagine myself in that same situation. Great job sis and I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Re: Tears Of Snow

    Another one of gr8 standard shini.i m surprised how u can maintain the reader's attention every time.n i luv ur choice of title.so dreamy....

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    Re: Tears Of Snow

    Wow!!!! This has got to be one of your best, if I do say so myself. I love snow, and I love how you portrayed it in this song! Great going, kiddo!

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