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    Re: Tears of War

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Tears of War


    Here I am with open arms, Waiting for my destiny to embrace me
    I pray to the heavens above each night, Wishing for an angel to come and save me
    I've fallen off the right path, And I have now lost my way
    I can't seem to find the right way, Can't someone show me the way?!

    "Show me the way"

    Lost in a forest full of lies, The tress howl out the sorrows that they have seen
    The tales that they tell are full of horror and saddness, How could anyone live through such things?
    Fear surrounds these woods, And blood covers the grounds
    Here I stand with my sword in hand, As I witness what I have done...

    "The crime that I have committed"

    As the skies grow dark and begin to flash with light, I stand before all that have fallen by my hand
    Rain begins to fall upon me, I watch as it begins to wash away the blood that I have spilled
    The tears begin to fall from my eyes, As I can't help but to cry for the lives that I have taken
    I fall to my kness and reach up to the skies, And scream out my sorrows!...

    "My crys to the heavens"

    A war has begun on the land, As I war with myself with what is right and what must be done
    As I charge into battle I can't help but to remember, To remember what was once my life before the fight begun
    Once filled with happines and smiles, I now have to take others life to protect those who are in my heart
    This isn't what I want but I have no choice, Since this is my destiny!...

    "My destiny"

    Swords clash as the thunder roars above, As if playing the drums of war for us
    Crys of agony and death are all around me, I watch as my own fall and I can't help but to cry silently as I fight on
    The rain pours down on us all, As if the heavens are crying for all of us to stop
    As we continue to fight on, We no longer hear their crys for we have all closed off our hearts...

    "Listen to heavens sorrowful crys"

    The battle wages on, As so many of us lose our lives to the fight
    You would think that we would have gave up by now, But we have swore to not lose this war
    We all must fight on because we have those that we must protect, Those that we care for so much
    So much blood has covered the battlefield, My enemy, my friends and mine are everywhere!...

    "So much blood spilled on this earth"

    Here I am with open arms, Waiting for my destiny to embrace me
    I pray to the heavens above each night, Wishing for an angel to come and save me
    I've fallen off the right path, And I have now lost my way
    I can't seem to find the right way, Can't someone show me the way?!

    "Show me the way, Show me the right way to go"

    Lost in a forest full of lies, The tress howl out the sorrows that they have seen
    The tales that they tell are full of horror and saddness, How could anyone live through such things?
    Fear surrounds these woods, And blood covers the grounds
    Here I stand with my sword in hand, As I witness what I have done...

    "The crime that I have committed, And the blood that I have spilled"

    As the thunder plays the drums of war, We go in for the final fight
    As the lightning flashes up above, You can see the war coming to an end
    As the rain pours down harder than before, The enemy finally falls
    As they all begin to cheer because we have won the war, I can't help but to let my tears fall...

    "My tears are for happines for we have won the war but they are also for the lives that I had to take.
    I know what I have done was for the best but I can't help but feel dirty.
    As I look at my hands which are still covered in blood, I continue to cry."....
    you...sound like someone I once knew...and a little like me...

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Thanks for reading my song May_Bloodrose_Pagan!!! *hugs* Oh I really remind you of someone and a bit of yourself huh?
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    Re: Tears of War

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Thanks for reading my song May_Bloodrose_Pagan!!! *hugs* Oh I really remind you of someone and a bit of yourself huh?
    Thoughts of Suicide


    Here I am again lost in the endless thoughts of you
    Thinking of why you have to go through all the pain that you do
    It's like your screams will never be heard
    Like you die more with every little word
    Reaching out but to find no touch
    Just thinking of all the pain is to much
    You watch yourself fade away
    Just waiting for the time of that day
    You know it's coming fast
    Because your body just won't last
    Your feel your body lose its soul
    Letting the dangers take hold
    Making you weak without a straight thought
    Knowing that you've lost the war that you fought
    Your face grows old one by one
    But you love the feeling of being numb
    When I look at you now it's not what it seems
    But you’re nothing like you where, or was it in my dreams
    Remembering the call I got when I wasn't home
    Nothing but tears fell over the phone
    Telling me your thoughts of suicide and how you wanted to die
    But the only thing I could do is cry
    I believe dreams come true
    But nightmares do to
    And this was there
    But all I could do was watch you die with despair
    With that sharp object in your hand getting ready to let go
    That night I watch the darkness take hold
    But when you left it touched another soul
    With the knife that you used, the knife that stole you
    It came to me and I could feel the cold blood run down my finger tips
    It was like a deadly poison was laid upon my lips
    It will steal your soul
    It will never let go
    You've faded away and you left me here to stay
    The empty spot you left will never feel
    My black shattered heart will never heal
    But my black soul tells me I'm the reason you wanted to die
    I'm your cause of suicide

    PS:
    You were my heaven and my heart, but I have nothing now thanks to you
    And now I’ll make you kill you.

    this is me...and something I wrote to someone I thought I love, but ended up breaking my heart...so yes you remind me of me alittle...and of someone I knew...before he killed himself...

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    I see.I'm so sorry for your loss.But I still think this piece is wonderful because you wrote it from the heart,even though it caused you such saddness.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Tears of War

    Shinigami's_Angel ur ware thinking about the war right

    but eny way i do like it

    ur so talented at this, im no good at this kinda stuff
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    I think that I was kinda thinkin about it,not 2 sure since I kinda worte this while I was tryin 2 fall asleep lol Wow thanks for sayin that i'm talented,that makes me so happy. And you shouldn't say that.If you write from the heart you can never go wrong.
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    Re: Tears of War

    well ur talented at it

    maybe ur right maybe i should try to write from the heart
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