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  1. Sep 25, 2006 12:03 PM #1
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    Tell me this
    when i set eyes on you my heart jumped
    you make me special
    i think of you everyday and night
    and i hope you fell the same way
    we say beside each others side
    i hope we will for ever
    your smell like roses how sweet?
    your sweet and cute
    how can any one resiste you
    i got dreams about you
    ?????? your pretty and i love you
    i hope you feel the same

    OMG no one likes this i spent all my free tim in school to do this for yous here on AO TT__TT
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    Re: Tell me this

    Capitalization and punctuation, emphasized by rhetorical devices would have given me pleasure while reading.
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    Re: Tell me this

    Kasai: I guess so, but everyone has a freedom to do their own styles...
    But I respect what all you've said... All from what you've said is really needed in making a poem...

    Equinn: Don't worry, I'm the first one that likes this poem...
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  4. Sep 26, 2006 08:12 AM #4
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    Re: Tell me this

    nice poem fellings are good to show lol
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  5. Sep 26, 2006 11:17 AM #5
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    awww thank you awww sooo much ^_^ i dint think anyone would like it TT__TT ^_^
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