wow man, your poems haven't changed at all, this is one is a pretty good goth poem, keep it up kaori.
tell me wat you never knew to say
no longer in my vision
no longer in my sight
just tell me that youre ok
tell me that youre alright
tell me about the weather
the pills or the stress
tell me everythngis great
just dont say its all a mess
dear, dear diary
let me see him again
i cant be told to restart
i dont remember where to begin
i hope like hell
youre happy where you are
i miss you more than anything
and your leave has yet begun to start
i know, ill say again
that im just fine
but ill wonder and worry
from time to time
so tell me all you can
and tell me all you know
give me all i can take
let me see all that you can show
i hope when youre gone
i hope that when you dissappear
youll lose your love for me
i hope you return to me right here
just tell me that youre okay
and tell me your alive on the inside
tell me you havent committed
social suicidde
tell me that you like it
or tell me that you miss me
tell me its all you wanted
just tell me the sky i hasnt turned bloody
i wrote this for a friend who is going into the military maybe as soon as this ummer. it scares me to death to know that someone as dear as my loki could have to go off to war, and that he might not come back to me.. he is one of my closest friends and i love him dearly. i want him to be ok and i think that expresses that.
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wow man, your poems haven't changed at all, this is one is a pretty good goth poem, keep it up kaori.
Wow nice poem, I love it. Keep it up!
I can understand... in a way. Nonetheless the poem has a good flow to it. I like it, LOL. Keep it up.
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awwws everyne is so sweet!! and ketket!! i cant belive you members my name over all this time!! god i lvoe you !! awwws all my friends are still here!! this kiks ass!!
love you everyone!!
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yo nice poem!.......it's real sad that your friend is going to war, but thats life...
*sigh*....since i love blood and fighting i wouldnt mind going to war though!lol
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nice poem, i really like the flow of the ryhmes in it... and i hope that ur friend comes back safe without 2many injuries (mental n physical)... anyway nice poem
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