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    tell me wat you never knew to say

    tell me wat you never knew to say

    no longer in my vision
    no longer in my sight
    just tell me that youre ok
    tell me that youre alright
    tell me about the weather
    the pills or the stress
    tell me everythngis great
    just dont say its all a mess
    dear, dear diary
    let me see him again
    i cant be told to restart
    i dont remember where to begin
    i hope like hell
    youre happy where you are
    i miss you more than anything
    and your leave has yet begun to start
    i know, ill say again
    that im just fine
    but ill wonder and worry
    from time to time
    so tell me all you can
    and tell me all you know
    give me all i can take
    let me see all that you can show
    i hope when youre gone
    i hope that when you dissappear
    youll lose your love for me
    i hope you return to me right here
    just tell me that youre okay
    and tell me your alive on the inside
    tell me you havent committed
    social suicidde
    tell me that you like it
    or tell me that you miss me
    tell me its all you wanted
    just tell me the sky i hasnt turned bloody




    i wrote this for a friend who is going into the military maybe as soon as this ummer. it scares me to death to know that someone as dear as my loki could have to go off to war, and that he might not come back to me.. he is one of my closest friends and i love him dearly. i want him to be ok and i think that expresses that.

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    Re: tell me wat you never knew to say

    wow man, your poems haven't changed at all, this is one is a pretty good goth poem, keep it up kaori.

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    Re: tell me wat you never knew to say

    Wow nice poem, I love it. Keep it up!

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    Re: tell me wat you never knew to say

    I can understand... in a way. Nonetheless the poem has a good flow to it. I like it, LOL. Keep it up.
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    awwws everyne is so sweet!! and ketket!! i cant belive you members my name over all this time!! god i lvoe you !! awwws all my friends are still here!! this kiks ass!!

    love you everyone!!



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    yo nice poem! .......it's real sad that your friend is going to war, but thats life... *sigh*....since i love blood and fighting i wouldnt mind going to war though!lol

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    Re: tell me wat you never knew to say

    nice poem, i really like the flow of the ryhmes in it... and i hope that ur friend comes back safe without 2many injuries (mental n physical)... anyway nice poem

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