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    Slippery When Wet~ Trampoline Tricks 2 Champion, Togy Ball Champion highteckdudu is off to a good start highteckdudu's Avatar
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    Re: Temper rising.

    I know you told me. hmm now every one knows my name! I dont care.
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Temper rising.

    Lol! Highteckdudu, huh? And i cant wait! Let me know though!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Temper rising.

    Um... ok... Then *bows* Thank you and come again! lol!
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    Re: Temper rising.

    I know i just felt like saying that! lol! Well you do technically have to come back!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Temper rising.

    On the pavment bearly breathing
    Hmmm wrong spellings there..

    Pavement
    Barely...

    I dont think you try to rhyme this poem...but theres rhyming for 3 stanzas,..
    In this poem i see a big leap made by you... you've improved my friend... a lot.. @.@ impressive indeed... the poem is getting more mature than before.. and the wording is nicer... but what i dont like is the same style you used.. it's too general to me... but.. still... a very good poem...i enjoyed it... the description is very good... keep it up..
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    Re: Temper rising.

    WOW ...... i can't say anything jast i can say WOW this is my favorite I ..... LOVE .......IT
    ....... i can't breathe .......... *_% NO WHAT HAPPEND TO My EYE ..........*_* ...sorry..... for this mistake ......... Gomy Mena

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    Re: Temper rising.

    Wow! That is the only word that came to my mind. Lots of emotions in this poem of yours Ichigo. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more from you.

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    Re: Temper rising.

    very strong and temper can hard to crontrol at times
    having friend around to help make thing easyer is a big way
    and evan though your friend are there sometime cant alway do alot
    but are there in is confort to know that you not alone

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