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    Tender Moment's Kiss

    Tender Moment's Kiss

    Sitting quietly,
    My heart starts to thud,
    During this uncontrolled silence.

    Time almost stops,
    My eyes start to glaze over,
    As I feel his presence next to me.

    Then I freeze,
    Feeling the soft warmth,
    Of his hand meeting mine.

    My heart races,
    Embarrassment covers my face,
    Yet wishing for this to never end.

    Edging closer,
    Smelling your enchanting scent,
    Finding you completely intoxicating and facinating.

    Eyes slowly close,
    Waiting in anticipation,
    Yet being nervous at the same time.

    Surroundings fade,
    Caught in the moment,
    When our lips gently glide to one another.

    Cautiousness vanishes,
    As his hand caresses my neck,
    Holding me close, never letting me go.

    Time moves again,
    As our lips part but eye's meet,
    Captivated by his dark brown eye's gazing into mine.

    Emotions overflow,
    Sensation of living a long awaited dream,
    Finding the one right for me, my first true love.
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    Re: Tender Moment's Kiss

    ya thats what im talking about i mean it was good but i wuld chang some things but its the 1st like happy pome i seen on ao i give u a 8 out of 10 lol

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    Re: Tender Moment's Kiss

    Thanks for the comment.

    I am sure people have written happy poems here on AO.. you just have to look for them.
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    Re: Tender Moment's Kiss

    i like the you worded your peom. and especially love the last stanza of your poem.
    i hope to read more of your work. like they say writeing is fun just let the words flow from your heart and place it on paper.

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