awww such a touching poem rave very meaningful great job putting it into words ^__^ 10/10
It’s a human heart
So persistent, yet so vulnerable
It’s … something like water actually
Free to flow wherever it wants to, mixing things [emotions] along the way
It’s soft and so warm
Needs love to go on and it gets so excited
When passion strikes
It stops
When depressed
It rises it’s beat when happy
Or just simply resumes back to normal when it’s over.
Everybody knows how easy it is to just grip a nerve
And it will stop beating
You can do whatever you wish to
It is your PREY after all
It recognizes one emotion extremely easily
Love… just three words – “I love you”
Is what all it takes to make it go on and on
You might get used to the feeling
But not when somebody devours
That tenderness, leaving you so open
No matter how many times,
It just makes me smile and chuckle instead
An organ, which is supposed to be go with the help of brain
Helps us most of the time with the emotions in our life
You might convince me that you have feelings for me
Indescribable ones, stronger than your life
But all I know is that it all ends the same way
Give me a reason to trust you
To believe you’ll put up with me for your life
Accept me with every flaw that I have
To not judge me simply because I’m different to you
Go ahead I will be listening, awaiting the response
My mindset has been set
And the water has dissolved so much that the rest settles down, deep inside
Bonne chance, dearest
But I am different now
Last edited by Rave_Grip; Apr 08, 2007 at 06:32 AM.
awww such a touching poem rave very meaningful great job putting it into words ^__^ 10/10
How is it meaningful? Please give more quality to your posts when commenting.
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hmm.. u spoke of the truth in a figurative way.. nice... good work my boy xD
but why u did not speak of the black hearts?![]()
hah i like this part.. girls do that don't theyIt recognizes one emotion extremely easily
Love… just three words – “I love you”
Is what all it takes to make it go on and on
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So much expression and so much to say....
water... the strongest of the elements but yet still the most fragille...
can the water handle the fire and yet not desapear nor turn off the fire?
Fire yet in trust can burn.... can it be handle... can it be trusted?
Those three words "I love you" can be tell from the lips but not from the heart... can they be really trusted?
Nothing less from Pyro ^_^ Great Sig ^_^ THANK YOU!!!!"show me.... THE BEAST!!!" The Beauty and the Beast movie
A very nice poem Rave-kun. Something that everyone must consider when thinking of love or immediatly falling in love..
Last edited by Descended From Darkness; Apr 09, 2007 at 01:59 PM.
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I like the comparison of emotion with water.it is a good juxtaposition of ideas and imagery.that is what a good poem should have.
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