Running Dashing Sprinting
All the bodies go
As they scream in fear
After the bang below
Burning Scorching Blazing
That one building does show
Falling straight to the ground
Breaking everyone does know
Laughing Snickering Giggling
The band of ten does go
With a building crashing on them
From the strike they did blow
Let it be known that this does not have to do with any specific event. Nor do I hope something like this ever happens.
WOAH!!!! O.O umm. ok now that is scary but it gives me a great description of this poem good job shadow^-^
Well it does kinda sound like 9/11 but that's okay. ^-^ You said it didn't have to do with a specific event and i believe you. I love the way you ryme on your poems, although I don't ryme much and can't I'm glad you can.
^-^ Your is consistant through out your poem and you have a wonderful vocabulary that you use in your poems. Keep up the great work Shadow. ^-^ I can't wait to hear more.
Hmmm sinister... :D indeed...
love the writing style... but i wish for more descriptions though..and more use of words ^^ try playing with them more..you will find it fun and interesting :D also the same with methaphores...try coming up some of your own.. ^^