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    Terrorist

    Running Dashing Sprinting
    All the bodies go
    As they scream in fear
    After the bang below

    Burning Scorching Blazing
    That one building does show
    Falling straight to the ground
    Breaking everyone does know

    Laughing Snickering Giggling
    The band of ten does go
    With a building crashing on them
    From the strike they did blow

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    Let it be known that this does not have to do with any specific event. Nor do I hope something like this ever happens.

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    Re: Terrorist

    WOAH!!!! O.O umm. ok now that is scary but it gives me a great description of this poem good job shadow^-^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Terrorist


    Well it does kinda sound like 9/11 but that's okay. ^-^ You said it didn't have to do with a specific event and i believe you. I love the way you ryme on your poems, although I don't ryme much and can't I'm glad you can.
    ^-^ Your is consistant through out your poem and you have a wonderful vocabulary that you use in your poems. Keep up the great work Shadow. ^-^ I can't wait to hear more.

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    Re: Terrorist

    Hmmm sinister... indeed...

    love the writing style... but i wish for more descriptions though..and more use of words ^^ try playing with them more..you will find it fun and interesting also the same with methaphores...try coming up some of your own.. ^^

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