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    Thank You

    Thank You

    Thank you for all the lies you told
    Thank you for every stare so cold.
    Thank you for every stabbing pain
    Thank you for hate that falls like rain.


    Thank you for all crimes you’ve done
    Thank you another injustice done.
    Thank you for breaking my heart
    Thank you for making my life fall apart.


    Thank you for being so naïve and cruel
    Thank you for making me look like a fool.
    Thank you for another lying song
    Thank you you’re really Satan’s pawn.


    Thank you for being so care free
    Thank you for being so damn bleak.
    Thank you for every moment spared
    Thank you, you never really cared.


    Thank you for another sleepless night
    Thank you your ignorance is polite.
    Thank you for the emotionless times
    Thank you for being so quick to drop a dime.


    So for all these cruel times you put me through
    Damn I just want to say THANK YOU!








    Sorry guys this one is me releasing anger! I also would like to say Thank you to Shinigami's Angel for giving me the confidence to write poems as way to release stress! Thanks Angel!
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    Re: Thank You

    Wow, I really liked this poem. I thought it was written in a cool way and the way you started each line with "thank you" didn't get old. I thought it was done well. I could feel that you were angry with someone for doing something. Poems are a nice way of letting out angry emotions and you did that very well. Can't wait to read more!
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    Wow! Awesome Fox!!! This was sooooooooo good! The angery emotion was awesome! I could sooooo feel it from this poem! Your getting good at this.Can't wait 2 read the next 1. Awesome job!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    this is one of the better hate poems i have ever read you are rellly good and ii cantwait to read another ,and i really understood eerything you pour'
    into youre words , very painfull this and spitefullalso all parts of life that are real
    i am glad you shared this
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    This was put together very well. I really understand your anger and pain. Its quite a treat to read. Looking forward to more.

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    Whoa ... you started every line with "Thank you" and it didn't get old! It's a nice way of releasing stress I agree XD Nice poem, please keep it up!

    THANK YOOH!

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    Hey Thanks Rave_Grip, solking, HolderOfTheDarkChalice , and Shinigami's_Angel for all you kind comments! And a Big Hug to Shinigami's_Angel for pushing me to write! You Rock Angel!

    BlueFox1

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    shit thats brillent, realy emotional, i love it simalar to what i wrote when i broke up with my ex i realy know were your comming from and this poem realy toutches me thankx

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