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    Thank You and Forgive me

    Ok, this might seem a little bit banal, but I just really wanted to say Thanks and ask for forgiveness...

    Thank You for your trust
    Thank You for your support
    Thank You for your love
    Thank You for just being there
    Thank You for the smiles
    Thank You, my friends...

    Forgive me for being too worried
    Forgive me if I can’t help much
    Forgive me for being unworthy
    Forgive me for being too far
    Forgive me for the tears I might bring
    Forgive me, my friends...
    Last edited by Lasura; Jun 03, 2007 at 05:06 AM.

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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    But then again, what are friends for? Nice poem, it was quick since it had a lot of repetition, but it's all good

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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    awww...lasura ^^ thats a lot of gratitude.. and...u don't need to say sorry for all of that... ^^ u have done more than enough... ^^ and..sheesh...i don't know what to say ^^ lol

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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    wow nice poem ....i love it ...it's short and i understand which feeling here .... now he \she should forgive you ....nice ...keep up...

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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    sounds alot like a prayer.lol but in poem format.at least...thats how im interpreting this.good poem.
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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    wow nice poem ....i love it ...it's short and i understand which feeling here .... now he \she should forgive you ....nice ...keep up...
    It's actually to noone exactly, but to all my friends, you too xxoxx!

    Thank you all for the nice comments!!!!

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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    You're the first person that I kind of know who lets her feelings be known so easily. I admire you for that! And by the way, how can you be unworthy if you can write such moving poems? So don't think too lowly of yourself, cause you're one of the kind!

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    Re: Thank You and Forgive me

    Quote Originally Posted by LouisaDeztini View Post
    You're the first person that I kind of know who lets her feelings be known so easily. I admire you for that! And by the way, how can you be unworthy if you can write such moving poems? So don't think too lowly of yourself, cause you're one of the kind!
    Yes, I'm very open... that could bring a lot of trouble too, but I just can't do anything 'bout that...
    And well... yes, I feel unworthy to one friend...
    And thank you for your support and for the nice words Louisa!!!!!!

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